I know I've reviewed quite a few times on this story, but I simply have to take a moment to applaud your ability to create a whole, believable story that makes the reader feel like they're stepping into another person'sin this case femme'slife. Every fact and seemingly out-of-the-ordinary occurence leads to something. Nothing in this story is thrown together and that takes an amazing amount of discipline. To anyone reading through reviews to decide whether or not to read this fic... it's well worth every shocked, I-should-have-seen-that-coming moment. I love Jynx and every single moment in this story has me coming back for more. I reread with every update (and sometimes just for fun) and it's one of those on my "Highly Recommend" list. Great Job author! ️

I get the impression she wants to die. I also think I have figured out where you want to take this with the plot threads you set up here. But I shall endeavour to find out whether I am right or not.

What a wild ride this fic has been so far. Excellent writing.

To the next chapter!

Good stuff. Your OC is excellently written and I am keen to see what happens next.

I enjoyed that immensely although I am struggling to picture Jynx other than the fact that she is white, small and has a black visor.

It took me over an entire week of all day and late nights non stop reading this to get from start to end. I laughed, I cried and I giggled like a little girl but I absolutely love this fic. It's probably my favourite fic I've ever read tbh. You writing is incredible, I love your characters, the plot and your storyline. I've become very invested in this story and can't wait to see what happens next! Poor Jynx. My spark aches for this bot family, I can't believe how attached I've become to them!

I have never read transformers commics but I imagine if I did it would be like the story you picture. I enjoyed the elaborated and spinned world you produced, the characters you introduced and how you painted them subjectively in characters eyes. Circumstances change and people change too. So it is a very realistic story, both in character development and society building.

I binged the last twenty or so chapters, and I'm actually a tiny bit proud I managed to figure out Rashact was the master right before Jynx and Gambit did ;; it's not much but I've never been that good at figuring stuff out without having it thrown in my face, so. but Wonderful job! I love reading your chapters and this was a nice treat for me. I hope you're doing alright! Have a wonderful day/night!

Awesome chapter.

Rashact was mated to Shockwave ?!
And was a senator ?!
Those were two twists that I didn’t expect at all
And I wonder what’s going on with Gambit ?
That’s gotta hurt for Megatron though, that Gambit knew all along.

Just one spelling mistake I found: warry carriers instead of wary carriers.

I don’t know if I mentioned this in an earlier review but I was listening to a song that really resonated with my interpretation of Nooks view of Jynx. The song was called Fight on, Fighter by, for KingCountry, and it just kinda struck me as a song that kinda fitted how I saw their relationship.

Anyway

I hope that the writing is going well, and you and yours are safe and healthy
Nearly to the 100 mark, keep up the good work

... I think I’ve been reading this fic for years now... and I still cannot look away every time I read it. There’s not enough praise I can type to ever represent how emotional and unexpected it is. At this point i don’t think it’s a fic, it’s an amazing story on its own. Usually when I read, a published book or not, I can tell where it’s going and when it’s going there. This work of art always has new twists and astounding detail in /just/ the right places. I will be here reading this story until it’s either finished or I’m dead. This isn’t the type of story to lose or ever forget, it’s much too impactful and beautiful to ever truly forget.

Seeing that you had updated made my day. I got so excited.

Awesome chapter!

Hello! I just caught up again since I decided to hold off reading after Ch. 90 so I could binge read and just wanted to say fantastic work as always. I had a feeling since the bit with Blackice freaking out in front of the Master that the Master was Rashact, but it was just a little tingle so it was still a punch in the face when it started becoming more obvious. (ie when Jynx was actively in denial which I don't blame her for) You are a freaking master at leaving clues behind in both obvious and sneaky af way. It's fantastic. I was actually planning on rereading everything soon to see what I'd missed.

On that note, you said in chapter 96 that you were looking for betas to help with clean up? Are you still needing people? I'm a bit late to the party since I'd put off reading the chapters, but I still figured I'd offer. Both because I'd love to help, and because I was already planning on rereading the chapters like I said.

I can't wait for the rest of this, Jynx is quite literally the best OC I've ever had the pleasure of reading and I can't wait to see how this arc ends and where she'll go in the future. Best of luck in your work and in your life during these strange, strange times.

Jynx and Gambit need more sibling bonding moments... I hope Gambit get rehabilitation like Jynx... love this story can't wait for more!

God I should have seen that coming but you always throw me for a loop and I never see it till it happens! Of course Gambit would know who his sire is! And of course a sick scientist would use that knowledge! Jeez! Though I definitely didn’t see the connection to Shockwave! Now I’m curious to see where this all goes. Especially with that Kill-switch! See you next update!

Hmm, is something happening to Gambit due to his powers? Or some consequence of the experiments done on him?

I'm not surprised he already knew, tbh, but god... imagine hearing about your "great" parent over and over again as someone tears you apart, knowing they abandoned you, and carrying that your whole life... I don't think I would ever be able to move past that.

"Her whole life, she'd thought this mech untouchable. Now, he was hiding in a hole."

Honestly, Gambit has really struck a chord with me. He has for years from your Tumblr posts, but especially right now. He just seems so very... tired. Exhausted on a soul deep level. He was a protector for Jynx and Arsine for so long, and from such a young age. He never had a chance to just... live.