wow you sure does have a way with words... but as a non-native English speaker you sort of lost me at times with all the fancy words... but I got the meanings alright... and oh the feelings involved in this kiss was painted to effortlessly to the reader... loved it very much... I do love that scene from the show... CaptainSwan forever...

I really enjoyed your use of vocabulary, and the images you painted with it. Cheers! : )

Beautiful ... wonderful!

I can't believe that was your first time writing for OUAT. this story was so good. Great job keep it up

Please please tell me there is more cause i love the way you write ans how you write CaptainSwan too!

Adorable! Perfect story!

I am loving all the fluffy CS fanfics, great story :)

beautiful