The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

Please remove all of the elements related to the reader like "Y/N" and replace them with any canon character or original character. Switch to first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it is allowed such as Archive Of Our Own.

Awww... Hey maybe you could do one of these for Supernatural!

Haha I had tears at the end and choked...so far I love all ur Plots...I'm excited if u ever write a full story with any of these

Loved it :)

Damn that was hot and I loved it :)

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Ahh, Matty Blue eyes. You are right. He doesn't get nearly as much love as he should. Thank you for being apart of the movement to remedy that.

I CAN'T stand that Gilbert Girl! What the hell made her think that any of that was a good idea? Oh wait, of course it was a good idea. "She was in danger." "She had to protect herself." It's just funny to me that she's always "protecting herself" at the expense of others.

Anyway, Matt laid it down right. I can't believe the reader left! It's so sad. Matt should get Caroline to punch that Gilbert Girl in the throat.

Another perfect chapter! Love me some Damon Salvatore!

He can play my game any night! Yes ma'am!

Good on ya with this one! It was nice to see Young Jeremy put it down instead of being a whimpering child during the sexy times. Personally, I think that when he's not at least a little bit in control of the situation it's weird. He's a hunter, for God's sake. He's super strong but yet girl are turning him into putty (and not in the good way) in the bed? No. Does not compute.

Thank you for allowing Mr. Gilbert to become a man and lay it down good and proper.

This chapter was great. It got you right in the Lockwood feels then got you right in the lady parts. Nice!

Perf. This is perf! Love me some Klaus! Yummy! He could appreciate my art any day!

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c'est biens mais je suis pressé pour elijah

Awesome!

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