This was so perfect, I can't even describe it. So beautiful, the way you captured their relationship and it felt like a part of the storyline. I'm in love with this. 33

You know, the two men should have gone off and built a bivouac, that ALWAYS helps. Always. I mean hey, if I remember correctly, it worked for Orion.

Wow! Nice story!
Though I must point out one mistake: It should be "The deaths of Masaki and KANAE were on the same day". You typed Sayuri instead of Kanae.
Anyways, keep up the great work!

So good captures the Isshin Ryuuken enemy/friendship perfectly. does your profile say you're fourteen years old? spoiler alert: you're gonna be a writer. :)

Nice one shot, certainly enjoyed reading it.