This is very good. Hook and Emma are very well written and the plot is very believable. Dialogue from the show fits and complements the story. I wish there was more, that we could learn that Emma found her parents and Hook defeated Rumple and then Emma found her way back to Hook. This is such a good beginning. Thank you for writing.

That was really good! I liked how you used the CS moments we know and love and turned them into your own original story

Can't wait for chapter 3

It needs to be a two shot. I NEED A HAPPY ENDING

Oh god this story is fantastic! I'd love to read more!

Finally, someone who used this idea! I Will be waiting for The next chapter!

Oo oooo ooooo

Love this!

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This is seriously my favourite thing right now! Beautifully written and the storyline is flawless - update soon!

you dont know how happy it made me to see that there was a chapter 2 already. i love it soo much. i love how you used some canon lines, it just reinforces this feeling that no matter what situation hook and emma could have met in, they would have fallen for each other in a similar way that they have had on the show because of who they are and how similar they are to each other and i think this fic perfectly illustrates that idea because of how well you characterized them, i think. hmm idk if i made sense but yes just know that i love this fic and your writing so muchh! i hope you continue :)

i love this fic so much omg god bless you for writing this

This is amazing!

Just reread this and hope you continue to write it. Very interesting twist and I can't wait to see what happens next.

This is an awesome story! Who's she going to meet? My guess is Ruby

Wow! Super impressed withs this fic. Just plain awesome. I cant' wait for more.

Plz updat ASAP