THAT WAS AMAZING!

This so sad but so greatly written!

My feelings. They're painful. It hurts. And I'm crying. Whhhhyyyyy? Well done, though, really. Great fic and it totally bothered me too, by the way, Oliver's assholiness.

OMG Huge rivers of tears. Oceans of tears. Wow. That's like Oliver's nightmares. Well written. Thank You.

OMG I liked this but I'm just crying now but it was beautiful

I really liked this. Well, when I say 'liked' I mean that I can appreciate it as a good piece of writing, but I would hate it if it was canon! Very believable, and tragic, although I like to think he would have told her straight off that he was telling her the truth in the mansion, and not just as she was fading out. Also her rambles went on for maybe a bit too long, but otherwise, very moving.

I wanted to like this but just couldn't. You need to seriously think about getting yourself a beta. Your grammar needs work as does your characterisation. I'm sorry but the one thing I hate is lazy writing. Oliver & Felicity are both very OOC, you actually make Felicity sound like a fifteen year old girl at times. Plus, you had Felicity dying, but still manage to give Oliver a pep talk and ramble on for how long? I don't think that would be possible while rapidly losing blood like she would have been, take Moira as an example. Please take this as it was meant, to be constructive & helpful. Invest in a beta reader, your writing will only improve as a result.

was asleep halfway thru it

Wow. I told myself I wasn't gonna cry, but I teared up near the end. I know it wouldn't happen, but if she had died, I would have thrown something. Thank you for breaking my little heart before I go to bed. :/

Wow that was beautiful!

Trust me when I say the EXACT same way when i saw the finale. In between my extremely loaded schedule, I've watched it at least 3 times, and that scene ALWAYS hits me. I need to vent... my vents usually come out in the form of rants, so i'm in for the season 2 finale discussion.

It took me only 10 seconds to burst into tears... Why did you write this ? It's so sad and the worst is that i could've imagined it in my mind...

Olicity 4EVER 3

This was so sad! How could you do this to my Olicity heart. lol.

BILY better be super happy! lol.

Oh god this broke me so bad I mean seriously I am so happy I read this at home because I actually cried because I know that he put her in danger in a situation that we knew could have easily gone very wrong and this had the same chance of happening as the ending that we got and it was jsut so sad and I still loved it!

That was sad. Well written but sad all the same - the thought of Felicity dying.

BUT I really really do think Oliver meant it when he said he loved her. It's just that neither of them are at the right place to do anything about that.

Plus Stephen Amell did say it came from a place of truth. AND Marc Guggenheim said that the unthinkable act was Oliver offering up the woman he loved as bait. Plus just look at the emotions in his eyes as he says it. And and he never said he lied when they had their talk on the beach. He just smiled at her.

As you can see I spent a lot of time researching this cos the finale left me as heartbroken as Felicity.