Ahh! I love this story its so heart wrenching but I can't stop reading at the same time! In fact I've been reading for most of my weekend by now . And its great to see Anna and Elsa together again! My anticipation for the next act is high, even though I do want to see them together peacefully but I can't wait to see how you finish this!

Damn. This ending made me cry! All in all another wonderful story written.
No criticism at all

I love the story. Beautifully written. It deserves more love.

Maybe I should’ve skipped over the Hans part...because now I can’t fully enjoy the beautiful thing that happens after it.

I was tilted at Hans’ unusual placement in this chapter but yanno after reading about court day...I ain’t so pressed.

yo...YOU LIKE OITNB? AND ELSANNA? literally perfect

I swear to god...if Belsa is in the story, I’m going to seriously consider dropping it! I liked how you switched it up and put Rapunzel as Elsa’s other love interest instead of Belle in Homebound. Please, please, don’t be Belle!

I don’t believe you!

and here we go...another of your fanfics. I loved Homebound(literally just finished it two minutes ago), and now I’m ready to spend another 5 hours reading this one. ilysm and I’ll leave a review this time!

I’m glad that jerk got what was coming to him! An excellent chapter! Now please kindly never let him get parolled (I don’t know court speak but let him rot in jail)

Ooh, so much DRAMA in that chapter. I’m so proud of Mama A but I’m now dreading what’s going to happen next. What’s their evil father going to do? Or is something else going to happen. Please don’t let this turn into a tragedy...

Hans almost got arrested there. Hans is pushing his luck. Those guys were clearly biker police.

Hans Westerguard could end up in jail for what he's doing. Bullying, stocking, harassment, racism and invadement of privacy. That's 40 years in jail.

Macado's is amazing! A billion years later, my review is only to say that. I mean the story is good too, but Macado's.

I've already stated how twisted and illogical the whole 'dual personality' angle of Mr Brown is. That is a desperate excuse that could arguably apply to terrorists or even hitler.

Ch33, and getting married?! Legally they are screwed if anyone realises their secret. Changing your name doesn't change birth records or government data such as social security numbers. They could easily be identified if anyone chose to look, not least when applying for a passport or filing taxes. I'd at least have liked some more discussion and moral dilemma from the girls, each endagering the other permanently with the threat of jail for the rest of their lives. Especially given how utterly flakey both Mr Brown and Hans are. If either of them happened to change their positions our favourite girls would be jailed.

Adoption also requires extensive background checks, but it is possible they would overlook that. Means lying to the kid for the rest of his life and hoping mr brown doesn't tell a stroppy teenage Olaf the truth.

Think you overlooked a lot of detail in the rush to end. Ironically you had the time earlier but squandered it! Argh!

I'm just a bit frustrated, but other than that the wedding scene was as was the proposal!