Love the story. This is the kind of SI story, I was looking for. Sad to see you cancel it but you are going to rewrite it then I will be looking forward to it.

God, this guy's damn pathetic..

cool and wheres the new story?

So... Wait are you ending this story? Because i started reading it few days ago and i think it's. Awesome

When's the new story coming out?

I hope Sen and the turians is still going to be in the rewrite

This is a great story I just hope what your planning to do will make it even better, and I cant wait to read it.

What made you decide to go for an OC based story instead of SI?

That...that is a giant shame. Honestly this WAS one of the better self inserts out there. It was enjoyable seeing the transition they character makes from who you are to what you need to become to survive the absolute dregs of society on Omega. I understand needing to rewrite and/scrap stories when you as the writer feel as if it can go nowhere,isn't interesting to you an author any longer, isn't up to your standards or you wish for a broader range of options. I will miss the self insert aspect of it for that is honestly my favorite type when done well enough

Huh my heart skipped a beat when i saw that first line.

Well i wish you good luck with your new story. ill check it out when i get a chance although i will say that i kind of like this story. It was definitely one of the better SIs out there.

That wasn't as bad as I was expecting. Do I love this story too much? My stomach dropped when I saw the word count in my inbox and that first sentence, although the smiley threw me off... then I read the rest.

Phew. Too many good stories are cancelled these days.

Have fun with the new keyboard :)

...wow... ya im done, good luck with your reboot.

Im new to your story and l really like it. About how often do you update

Interesting story. there's a curious sub-genre in ME SI fanfic that requires that the SI face extremely difficult circumstances, overcome them by learning to survive and then drop half of the survival skills in pursuit of "doing the right thing". I suppose its the same thing that makes quarians so mysteriously popular. In any case, your chapters 9-11 demonstrate this and nearly drove me (and possibly others?) off your fic. ch12 really helps in this a lot and although somewhat grudgingly, I will be following this fic to see where you take it as your characters are very well written and you do action scenes quite well too. Thanks for your hard work on this fic.