I really loved this story, only thing was the reference to the "Underworld", instead of the " Underground". I don't think the realm if the dead is quite where they are, but I lived it just the same. Good job.

Ah this was very sweet!

I am liking this story but I have to tell you, not loving the fact that he was watching her have sex with other men in his crystals. That is creepy creepy creepy. Also, if she ever found out about it i don't see how she could react in a positive way about it. Creepy! Other than that so far so good.

I really enjoyed reading this story!

i loved it !

Ermuhgerd...so loved this story. Thank you for a great read

Damn cliffies. Oh wait that is right I try not to read uncompleted works. Saves on my heart and my computer. I GET FRUSTRATED EASILY.

I think Mrs. Kelley is lucky that Jareth didn't have her bogged. Bwahahahahaha

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you.

love this wish there was mormore

I enjoyed. Thank you for posting.

Really enjoyed your story

I was just thinking as a suggestion, wouldn't it be more ironic if Jareth lived on the 13th and Sarah on the 12th? Just a thought. *awkwardly laughs before turning and slamming face first into the wall*

I was also beginning to wonder if she'd forgotten... She obviously remembers something happened, but does she remember specifics? Hmmm... Jareth is a hard person to forget after all.

Good start. There is a Jareth/Jared name mix up in the elevator scene with the couch. I'm curious about how he's going to explain himself when Sarah finds out the truth...