There better be a smut scene after this one...please...pretty please with a cherry on top

The pacing was great, it was so gradual and fluid that nothing really felt out of place.
So when the climax hit, it was like an exhale after a really, really long inhale.
Mike, unfortunately, didn't catch my attention as much as he did Felicity's. Even if Oliver hadn't been in the picture, I would still find it difficult reading his dialogue. Rationally speaking, I know that this was from Felicity's perspective of taste but this "humor" she saw in him... I just didn't see it. Maybe you didn't want him too likeable? Eh. He just sounded like the classic nice archetype.

The coupon clipping was actually my favorite scene. You did make one small mistake though; Felicity said that she had no way of getting into contact with her mother again yet a chapter later, it is noted that she calls her mother every birthday and at first I thought what that meant was she leaves an annual voicemail of her birthday song for her mom, which I thought added to the poignancy of their relationship but then I recalled that Felicity mentioned the phone line was disconnected from her mother's end so.

But besides that, this story went by shortly and sweetly.

Awh I wish you had continued this! Granted idk where it would go from here but I loved their domestic bliss and the appearance of Lydia again!

I love that Oliver sleeps on the couch with Felicity isn't there. It's kinda sad but also very interesting.

Feng chui lol hahahaha so original XD

This was a nice story. I'm so glad you had them stop making out before things got out of hand, because that just wasn't right. It would have not only disrespected her current boyfriend, but would have also ruined the friendship and trust they'd built if it did.

I'm really confused about the mom storyline in this chapter... In chapter 2 you said she was a meth addict that couldn't be contacted... But in this one she sounds lovely and has a working phone number?

I like the ending of this chapter. It's so sweet and caring :)

Lydia is hilarious! She reminds me of some of my own friends but a little more pushy (not in a bad way though) xD Loving this story!

lindo lindo! continue por favor!

este ultimo capitulo esta maravilhoso! parabéns!

So i'm pretty new to the Arrow fandom, but being on tumblr before I had always shipper olicity cause I mean, how can you not... I just started reading fics about the two, but sticking to one shots.. yours is the first multichapter I read and I must say I'm glad I did, I love this story and I absolutely love reading about any otp being domestic and stubbornly denying their feels for each other, it's the best thing ever- so I really enjoyed this, thank you for writing it and if you do update again, I shall be happy to read :)

Nice fic! I loved it, but I'd like to read more... Keep it going!

Smoochy ending is great.

chap 1 - 9 are all good - oliver working at a dojo was an excellent idea! please continue, i can't wait for another chapter! well, i can, because i have to, but i really do hope that there is a chapter coming out soon!