Very well written.
Lovely and romantic
Thanks for sharing the story with us! -

AWWWW what a sweet ending. I loved this from start to finish.

Dang, thank you for writing such a fantastic story. It really made my day to read your wonderful writing. There was never a dull moment. I love the character flaws that you put into everyone as well. Not every author remembers to do that but it makes the characters so much more realistic and relatable and you did it in just the perfect amount. Absolutely wonderful job, I’ll definitly be checking out some of your other works in the near future!

Very enjoyable.

Well I enjoyed the early stories about how cowardice Cala was, because there's she uneasy, but as the story proceed, I found her cowardice is more stupid than cute. She's a queen and she act like a teenage brats, it's riddiculous and I found it ruined the story. She abandond her duty as queen as wife as mother. Becajse of ego and cowardice herself.
She fail. Sorry.

So cute

Very good chapter

Is the Elurín mentioned here the great-grandson of Elu Thingol? Or did they just happen to have the same name?

Ay, he's so smooth

So a few suggestions:

I stumbled upon this story while looking for Thranduil
Fanfiction.

First, point of view is important. Either stick with first person (which is inevitably more childish - I've only read a few authors who can pull it off) or stick with third. I've noticed within the first chapter that you switched between first and third- which is choppy for the reader and doesn't flow. I would switch everything to third person - it reads much better and flows naturally.

Next, I would switch everything to past tense. Present tense (to me and most people) does not flow properly and is more complicated to not only write in but also to read in. Notice that almost all authors write in past tense - present tense is almost unheard of in actual books.

I haven't gotten past your first chapter because of these things, which tend to bother me - but I am intrigued in your story. I don't mean to come off as condescending - I'm just giving you constructive criticism.

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Even though this is about the fifth time I've read this I still love it!

Quite a journey, this tale. And to think, it all began with a humble beekeeper...
While it was a long time coming (perhaps a touch too long), this ending was fitting. Thank you all the love and effort (especially research) you wove into this story - it is all the more enriching, having seen such care. I think a breather and a few lighter reads will be needed, but I will most definitely return.
I wish you peace of mind and all the best with your endeavors ~

Spoilers mentioned, for anyone who has yet to read:

I find myself growing less sympathetic to Cala with her insistence to stay away and her uncertainty with her manner of addressing any future decisions.
It's disheartening, considering how much I liked the development of her character.
It has been far too long (nearing three centuries) for any flimsy excuses or faulty logic to hold the same weight as when she first left.
In other words, her persistence on this matter no longer reflects a plight, but reads rather like a tragic flaw, or sorts. Pride, cowardice, denial - take your pick.

Unless, of course, this is intentional. Although, it doesn't change the fact that it's frustrating to read - and do not misunderstand, the material is still quite good and highly engaging.

I do love the plots twists and change of scenery - enough to keep one so invested, but not too much to be dizzying or prolong a state of high emotion.
Similarly, I enjoy how full this story feels because of the depth you devote to character development and dialogue.
It's a bit saddening to know only a third of the story remains until it ends...

Perhaps I should have proofread my last review...oops.
Oh, well. I cannot correct it now. As I am running on little sleep and multitasking, indulging in light reading on my breaks lends a little haste and informality to the activity.
Pardon any prior or future errors ~