Well, a bit forward for my tastes, but still good. Wonder if you'd think of doing a reverse of this story, with Elsa being the model, hmm?

Wow Anna is a sexual deviant! And how the hell did the professor allow this? He must know their related! But interesting premise. I really enjoyed Annas vixen like behavior. It was really hot

I saw that comment they made about incest being MA... *shakes head* If incest is MA then I'm assuming they consider homosexual to be MA too?

Also I've been lurking in the CU forum since I learned of their existence so I'm well aware of what they are doing, and though I don't like it... when it comes down to it, FF is to blame for their mostly dumb rules. Still, the way CU go about doing their business makes me sick...

Frankly, I'm glad this whole scare thing is going on because that way all the good authors can relocate to a site like AO3 that doesn't have stupid restrictive rules and allows writers to let their creative juices flow.

PS: Love this story. :D

This two-shot was short and sweet. I loved Anna's cuteness along with her seduction in this story. Nice balance. Simile and metaphor again is something I see you enjoy using (especially electricity)..."beating like a woodpecker" makes no sense as a simile...maybe beating like a drum (which you used later)...a woodpecker pecks...I could see her heart beating as fast as the wings of a hummingbird...or just use less simile...especially when you are describing the same organ in the same scene...the reader understands the excitement already. Your description on this sex scene was really good...

Thanks for sharing.

i'd like to see elsa return the favor here. also, maybe expand this to be just a pure fluff story? just let the girls be adorable and cute and hot as hell together, as it's clear that elsa's feelings are deeper than she realizes and that anna has had feelings for her for quite some time.

Shame it's completed.
Would love to read a huuuge novel about theses two in modern life :-)
Pleaaaaaaase ? :-)

Nice work !

Okay, that was hot. I'm waiting for a chapter 2. Because you need to write it. It's an order.

Hahah omg hot hot hot great story

Omg that chapter made me blush, haha love it

So, that was awesome. Well written and touches all the right notes for a lighter Elsanna story.

THIS IS SO DAMN HOT!

ANNAAAAAA! GOOD THING ELSA DOESN'T GET A HEART ATTACK!

There should be a continuation! *.*

Gods, that's hot.

Very sexy story! I'd love to see a part 2