one. was that an avatar last airbender reference with the My cabbages?
two. turning hiccup female kills the story and hiccup and toothless' relationship I wanted them to be together and get kids but nope

Honestly, this was ok and all, but turning Hiccup into a girl ruined it for me.

Please, in the next story, don't do that. That kind of thing kills any interest I might have.

I think I saw a Halo reference when Astrid says wake me when you need me Calder says as you wish chief it sounds similar to the end of halo 3 when Master Chief goes into cryo sleep and tells Cortana to wake me when you need me.

You know, I was really enjoying this story, right up until you turned hiccup into a girl. That killed it for me. Ah well, it was good while it lasted.

This is my fav chapter so far. Though I would've loved to see Mildew's reaction to Calder.

Rereading loved it the first time through

ch 3

So Calbar is like timeberchangescrill/scrilltimberchange/scrillchangetimberjack ? Wow ! Maybe he could try the other shots beside the scrill maybe timberjack, and changewing acid shot if he used all combined .

Great job!

Once again ot was a great chapter! I don't rally know what to say except bravo!

Great story so far! I'm really enjoying the character developments but I honestly am too tired to follow Everything perfectly. I apologize about that... You're still keeping the personalities of the original people at a near perfect scale! Great work!

9.99/10 ;)

This seems to be a great story! I'm both surprised and sad that you only have two Reviews after 174k Words... Oh well... I know you have 6 more chapters but i just got to say that you seem to mix the Words "to" and "too". It's supposed to be like the examples.

Example 1: "I'm going to berk."

Example 2: "I'm going to berk too!"

Otherwise i really like your way of Writing and i enjoy that you kept the characters as they are supposed to be! Great work with ever single personality!

Talking dragon aside, this chapter went as I expected. Nice work.

Ok, good start, very good start.

I assume by "human dragon" you mean dinosaur. If that is the case, this will be very interesting. I will watch your story.

Funny thing is, I watched the Lost World: Jurassic Park last saturday and the third one, my favourite will be on TV this saturday, and since I read a lots of HTTYD fanfiction, I had a similiar story idea, only in that version the dragons replaced the dinosaurs.I may write it, who knows.

Great work, keep it that way