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thegrison chapter 1 . 5/2 What a FAILED Naruto guns? They are pointless against a ninja. They move and reaction to things a lot faster than even the best pro in sports or fighting. But the real killed of this is the flashback that is NOT believable. They were 16-17 when the 4th war happened. So your story was dead before it really begins. |
Guest 8 chapter 10 . 1/5 Have Sakura makes the Uchiha & Haruno Clans as a side Branches of the Uzumaki-Namikaze Clan. After Sakura steals some Naruto’s Sperms for the Village. The Villagers decides to treated Naruto’s & Sakura’s kids as they did Sasuke after the Uchiha Massacre. The villagers treated Sarada as they treated like they did Naruto. Few years later. Tsunade on her deathbed. She becomes the Hokage. She send Sai & Yamato out to find Naruto. She hopes that Naruto’s girlfriend is dead. She lifted the banned cause it was her fault that got her friends killed. She knew that Naruto should be the Hokage not her. Sarada understandings her new life as a branch family member. Sakura decide to make up for her betrayed that she knows that Tsunade sneaky have sperms of Naruto. Sakura, Tenten, Hinata, & Ino decided all of them become Naruto’s wives just in name only. They have his kids. The name of Sasuke is forbidden to ever use it. Sakura named Her Son, Haku. Tenten named her Son, Hiruzen. Ino named her son, Menma. Hinata named her son, Boruto. Livewire dies in a war with the Justice Lords. Naruto’s kids had dreams of their father’s wife died. Sakura felt guilty so, she give Naruto a kid. This time is a daughter. Her name is Chiyo. Hinata decides to follow Sakura’s lead. She also had a daughter. Her name is Himawari. The Konoha now they need Naruto back. Jiraiya found out about Livewire’s death. |
Guest 84 chapter 10 . 9/17/2019 Have Sakura makes the Uchiha & Haruno Clans as a side Branches of the Uzumaki-Namikaze Clan. After Sakura steals some Naruto’s Sperms for the Village. The Villagers decides to treated Naruto’s & Sakura’s as they did Sasuke after the Uchiha Massacre. The villagers treated Sarada as they treated like they did Naruto. Few years later. Tsunade on her deathbed. She becomes the Hokage. She send Sai & Yamato out to find Naruto. She hopes that Naruto’s girlfriend is dead. She lifted the banned cause it was her fault that got her friends killed. She knew that Naruto should be the Hokage not her. Sarada understandings her new life as a branch family member. |
Guest chapter 10 . 9/16/2019 Naruto should’ve said something like. What if Dan cheated on you while you were in Engaged? |
Guest 8 chapter 10 . 9/16/2019 Sakura decide to make up for her betrayed that she knows that Tsunade sneaky have sperms of Naruto. Sakura, Tenten, Hinata, & Ino decided all of them become Naruto’s wives just in name only. They have his kids. The name of Sasuke is forbidden to ever use it. Sakura named Her Son, Haku. Tenten named her Son, Hiruzen. Ino named her son, Menma. Hinata named her son, Boruto. Livewire dies in a war with the Justice Lords. Naruto’s kids had dreams of their father’s wife died. Sakura felt guilty so, she give Naruto a kid. This time is a daughter. Her name is Chiyo. Hinata decides to follow Sakura’s lead. She also had a daughter. Her name is Himawari. The Konoha now they need Naruto back. Jiraiya found out about Livewire’s death. |
DeadLegion696 chapter 1 . 8/5/2019 Damn, first time I've read fanfic this I knew Sakura staged her death so she could crawl back to Sasuke. But here's a question that I've had in mind to ask the author: 'What happened to Hinata?' |
Guest chapter 8 . 10/10/2018 You can not the characters of dc to Naruto characters get that straight dipshit |
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 10 . 5/18/2018 I really don't understand what the fuck happened in this story. So first we have Sasuke kill Sakura and Naruto gets blamed for it. Then everyone acts like he just left the village for no reason. Then we learn that it was all a lie and Sakura and Sasuke have been living in the village all along but people still wander why he is the way he is. |
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 6 . 5/15/2018 Why are Tsunade and Kakashi and pretty much everyone acting like they didn't betray Naruto and that he just vanished after Sakura died? |
Monster King chapter 10 . 2/26/2018 Great story. |
Kronium345 chapter 10 . 12/28/2017 Excellent story. Amazing drama, plot twist and story. Love it |
Stratos263 chapter 5 . 4/15/2017 Good luck naruto and his team |
Stratos263 chapter 4 . 4/15/2017 Stupid Anbu |
Stratos263 chapter 3 . 4/15/2017 Next chapter please |
Stratos263 chapter 2 . 4/15/2017 Good luck naruto |