Reviews for All of Me
Guest chapter 7 . 8/27/2016
Awesome! I wish you would write more!
Zillabean chapter 7 . 1/20/2015
This was so hot and delish and wonderful and I WANT MORE :D Beautifully done, sexy yet still sweet and just overall so alluring. I love these saucy chapters, you do so well! I do hope there is more coming, lovin' 'em! :D
Guest chapter 6 . 1/6/2015
This is a really cool concept. Looking forward to the next part.
Emmalicious chapter 2 . 12/13/2014
This is awkward how Hershel and Descole are brothers.
Guest chapter 6 . 10/30/2014
Wow!
I cant wait to see what happens next. Is Emmy pregnant? What will happen to them and their relationship?
finnythewise chapter 6 . 10/21/2014
I'm so happy you updated!
I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Zillabean chapter 6 . 10/20/2014
I've been waiting for another update, so glad to see you're keeping the story going! Chapter 5 was so sexy/saucy and I'm gonna be honest, I hope there's more of that sort of thing later on down the line ;) But this chapter (6) was a good follow-up to reach deeper into their emotions from the whole ordeal. The fear and regret, and the acceptance and comfort. It was very bittersweet. Looking forward to more, keep updating!
Guest chapter 5 . 10/16/2014
Please update! This is getting good!
Guest chapter 5 . 9/29/2014
This is so good, but very nerve racking! (which is a good thing) Please update soon!
OVER888 chapter 5 . 9/12/2014
About time Descole did something decent for them! This story is haunting...it creeps me out...don't stop.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/2/2014
My god - this is crazy and I love it 3
You may want to consider a proof reader and filling in a bit more description/detail, but personally I think it's coming along great and cant wait for you to update!
This chapter was a good length - long enough for you to get into it without it ending suddenly!
I really want to see where this goes!
mm chapter 5 . 8/18/2014
Heh. Descole did something decent for once XD
Guest chapter 5 . 8/17/2014
I liked the length of this chapter compared to the others.
And I think you did super well considering the topic - I'm dying for more and what happens now between the professor and emmy.
Just one note; some things such as emmy's bad head wound seem to have completely disappeared, and a few other minor consistency things, but I really love it, and it's so hard to find good Lemmy stories!
A guest chapter 5 . 8/12/2014
As I read this, I realize how weird of a situation it must be for them. And Descole's even weirder for watching them...
You wrote it really well, I could feel the uncomfortableness, yet it was kind of hot at the same time. Update soon!
Zillabean chapter 5 . 8/11/2014
This chapter was so hot and heavy and sad and sweet and bitter all at once. I will readily admit I'm rather fond of hard and rough sex scenarios, but always with the underlying theme of affection. You managed to hit that here, but with the enticing danger of unrestrained lust, which isn't an easy feat. Nicely done, VERY sexy, yet still sweet, and sombre. I would love to see you write more of these styles of pieces :)
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