I really like how you keep Alice's character true the whole fiction. I wish you would continue it i really like it :D. If you do could you put more about John? Since we haven't really seen him. Thank you great fanfic!

Actually, I really think this is a good story, but girllll, you need to fucking update!

It is really good, please update.

Amazing AU! I love the idea of having an OC tell the story, I don't think I've read anything like that before and it's great! Update as soon as possible and keep writing awesome stuff!

Great start! I really liked it. Update soon!

Nice chapter. Alice got angry a lot hehe
Eight and Alice fighting over Eight's list. Lol... Eight a player? Never imagined it even if he is so cool, Navrina together forever! XD
Please make this a Navrina (well kinda obvious in this already), and a NIX

I cannot imagine Eight kissing some random girl as I am pure Navrina and Nix. Update soon I suppose... Pretty interesting I guuess and there isn't enough humuor and sillyness like you said. I think Mar should kick Richard's a** and then put her with Eight ...

Lol that was random and so much swearing. It's random in a great way. So is Alice supposed to be Number who?
Awesome start. Made me laugh. Update soon XD