Wonderful ending to a wonderful season. I read your bio and it's truly unfortunate that you've lost your job. Hopefully you're doing well now since that was over a year ago. Truly hope you'll one day return to this incredible story. I wish you luck in all your future endeavors

Pplease update

You did an amazing job of blending together three different story settings and getting them to (mostly) play nice, I hope you return to this someday.

Really hoping you come back and finish this one day, it's awesome. Were the Ironborn supposed to attack Dorne in the next few chapters? Vic being near Sunspear with the remains of his fleet and Myrcella getting self-defense training seems to foreshadow that?

Harems are hard to pull off, more often than not turned a serious story into a joke if the author is not careful. Just listen to what you think is best and let the characters be themselves in the story. They say characters write themselves, indeed they do, you create their personalities, to go against it makes them unrealistic. Only authors who listen to their characters can make a story great and really stand out. I have read many stories with characters of blank and bland personalities, more of a self indulgent, authors guiding them like a puppet master instead of treating them as humans with free will.

Since this 'Legion' is also partly based on the Roman Legion, they also have to fear Decimation, a tactic where if a man flee's his legion will face a tact called 'Decimation', the men are gathered into groups of ten and are forced to pick a rock out of ten. Nine of the rocks are black, whilst the last is white. the men in white are bonded, and the blacks are forced to beat them to death, then suffer a month of forced hunting and gathering away from camp.

Cont from chapter 10: Throw it all away to "prove your love"? I don't think so. Love is freely given and when you say "do X to prove you love me " that's not love at all. Either you trust then or you don't. You love them or you don't. Yes she was hurting and in turmoil, but that is no excuse to manipulate and blackmail her(potential) partner. I actually liked her character in this story. However, I am now disgusted by her.

Throw it all away for love? What a cuck.

Katanas are actually thicker, shorter, and heavier then European swords... just saying

Please make more chapters of this story it's so cool

I hope you make more chapters, this story is epic.

Please make more chapters of the story it's so awesome!

was the bar scene from The Patriot? it seemed similar. also well done
thanks for the chapter. they seem to be getting better the more I read.

THIS WAS F**KING SIIC! haha thanks for the chapter. And I really like your choice for the bard, Malukah is one of my favorites

I think you made the right choice. I've always wanted Ned to Survive, it would have made the story a bit better in my opinion (the original I mean) but I get why he had to die, both originally and now in this story. His and Robert's deaths were needed to drive the story to what it was meant to become. And now we've got a new player that the crazy Uncle Beratheon will fallow into battle because he believe's he deserves to be there, just like Ned. the other uncle died in the original.. I've got a feeling something similar will happen this time as well lol.