Reviews for It'll Be Okay
Magnificent Bastard06 chapter 18 . 4/26
It Sucks that this story probably won't ever end up being finished, I feel like we were just starting to come to the point where Finn and co start turn this whole thing around. Would have really liked to see a happy ending
Olive-Gravity chapter 18 . 10/3/2019
hey! i came over here from ao3! i was hoping you would finish this? i need a happy ending D:
if you dont ofc thats fine, this is your story and your life i cannot tell you what to do! if you even havent written it but just had an idea of what you were gonna do to resolve it thatd be great!
uhhh this usually isnt my thing but i guess i was looking to suffer tonight lmao
Verdauga chapter 1 . 5/24/2019
Woah...
Guest chapter 18 . 11/25/2018
Any hope for an update? I have been with you since the beginning!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2018
Your writing gives me chills. So discrriptove in all the right ways! Outstanding!
TheRealDunkleSans chapter 18 . 11/21/2018
This is really great! I mean, it is immensely dark, but I enjoy the dark parts in a sea of fluff and lovey dovey stuff. I understand if you never finish this, but I would be lying if I said that I didn't want more. Again, thank you for taking me on this emotional roller coaster ride.
shelwyn chapter 18 . 9/18/2018
Well here we are. Thanks for writing so far. I really dont expect another chapter. Thank you for what you've written tho. Anyway that's that then right? Thanks again the journey was nice I guess.
shelwyn chapter 17 . 9/18/2018
Eh I can already tell you cant finish your own story I've been reading too much not to tell when someone escalates too much but can't finish it. Just kill your main character already. Really just that pushes through the block when you realize that's the direction you've written yourself to.
shelwyn chapter 16 . 9/18/2018
Oh I see now why this isnt complete. You wrote yourself i to an emotional hole. Just let them all die why bother troubling yourself writing a happy ending?
shelwyn chapter 15 . 9/18/2018
Why'd that guy die?
shelwyn chapter 14 . 9/18/2018
For some reason I expected this story to be complete
shelwyn chapter 13 . 9/18/2018
Oh gods reading raincorn speech and thoughts almost made me drop that is so annoying.
shelwyn chapter 12 . 9/17/2018
Ah the whole trap thing has always seemed kind of ridiculous to me considering she's such a flaming monster but okay.
shelwyn chapter 11 . 9/17/2018
Wow things really are getting exciting lol
shelwyn chapter 10 . 9/17/2018
Lady is an adult as well I think? Not just Kake but not sure of she counts as main cast.
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