Oh, how I wish that happened...

This is very good and certainly hot. Two comments that I think will make the sex more realistic, because the lead-up is awesome:

1. Most women would not stop him from bringing her to climax orally. She can come
twice, and will get more pleasure whe he's inside if she's already come. Just sayin'.

2. In my experience and in discussions with friends, no one actually screams or shouts during sex, especially not in a bed and breakfast where people can identify you. Groan, moan, sigh, or cry out, yes. It's something that a lot of fanfics use that doesn't ring true, and your writing is good enough that I don't want to see you fall into that trap.

Hope you don't mind the constructive criticism mixed in with the love. Happy holidays!

Wonderful follow up to the finale. Excellent one shot.

Awww. So sweet. I can envision this at the end of 3x22. Poor Regina but Emma now gets her happy ending ! Yay !

so good!

Love it! Great job!

Oh wow, this was good. Close to how I see it going. I wish we'd get to see their first time but we won't.

oh that was awesome!

amazing! ah, my feelings :D

Loved it :-)