Reviews for The Mental Hybrid
StonerMcWeedPot chapter 13 . 5/25
Man this was actually surprisingly good. I wasn’t sure how well the story was going to turn out after reading the first few chapters but I’m loving it so far. I hope the MC doesn’t turn out to be a queen, that way we can avoid reading some weird gender-bending BS.

Hopefully you decide to come back and continue this one day, I’m looking forward to finding out more about the MCs past as well as what’s going to happen next in the story.
potatopatato chapter 1 . 5/24
Would love to see this continue
FriggleBerry chapter 6 . 9/6/2019
I love transformation stories but this one isn’t my style I prefer when they aren’t a little bitch all the time. Dude has the body of a xeno fucking use it don’t sit and get beat to death by a gun less grunt. Killed this story for me I just don’t do the whole I’m a pussy but have to power not to be
Guest chapter 13 . 7/12/2019
Could you possibly put this story up for adoption? I mean I don’t know what you are doing, and it’s been about 2 years since you updated this amazing… and well I bet someone out there is worthy enough to finish this story… I’m not saying that in a mean way, or to degrade you, BUT a story like this shouldn’t be left to rot among the abandoned works of art… so if anyone can get into contact with the writer, please see if they’re willing to pass on this amazing story onto you or anyone you believe is capable of keeping this story alive. I hope you do return someday, but until I’ll be removing this story from my tabs… good luck, and peace out.
The Impossible Muffin chapter 13 . 4/21/2019
I was just thinking that he should write a log, and then I read this chapter!
Neon dagger chapter 13 . 2/21/2019
i know that it is unlikely but please continue.
vmage2 chapter 3 . 10/24/2018
"Left for right" should be "left or right".
vmage2 chapter 2 . 10/24/2018
Coushin should be cushion. Bellie should be belly. Ingly should be tingly.
Guest chapter 13 . 10/4/2018
~One Year Later~
Guest chapter 13 . 9/24/2018
please finish
Majiri chapter 13 . 9/10/2018
I really enjoy this story. It's one of the few that doesn't have the main character immediately start communicating with the Xeno's and befriending them. I like how there's a mystery of what's going on at the complex and I like how Phil is trying to deal with his new body and instincts.

I hope you continue this, there aren't nearly enough good human turned xenomorph stories out there.
Kahizzie chapter 13 . 8/24/2018
Good story, just caught up but I can't wait for the next update
LameTechGuy chapter 13 . 7/16/2018
I really enjoyed this story (though incomplete), your writing style is amazing. I’ve written a few stories in the past, that has the same issues your having. The only advice I could give you, is this- get a google account and start writing your stories there. It’s safer, easier, and you don’t have to worry about loosing your work. Also you can just copy and paste the text into the doc manager, and once that is done, you can fix the formatting. It’s very easy, and you can access your story anywhere and on any device you have internet on. I know that I may sound like some weird-o trying to sell a product, but it works… other than that, I hope you continue with the story, and blah blah blah…
Guest chapter 13 . 7/16/2018
Love your stories man, while I’m sad that you can’t post often I’ll check in every decade or so to see if there’s been an update. I think this story is really cool and I love how you’ve handled it so far. I’ll be waiting!
DoUknowDehWey chapter 11 . 3/30/2018
Brah… I like your story and all, and I've been reading since the beginning but… what in the living world is taking you so long to update? It's been just over 6 months since your last update and nothing… did you give up on your fans? Cuz boi, I think I'm gonna drop this, and I really don't want to… so brah I don't know what's going on, but I hope you get back to work… please please update…
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