Oh cool I’ll definitely give if not one, both sequels a look!

Cute !

I do have one thing to nitpick at. I love this story and everywhere you have gone with it. I think Natsu losing control when claiming Lucy makes a lot of sense. He’s young and eager, and he did it too soon due to her following him out to the mountains. However! It doesn’t make much sense to me that Natsu didn’t set aside his own self image to fetch Wendy right away to get Lucy healed. Natsu would not be one to care that it was his fault she got hurt, because regardless she was hurt and he would want to do everything and anything he could to fix it ya know? I don’t remember if Wendy was out on a job or not but yeah leaving Lucy injured for so long I don’t think is of any importance to the story. The importance is that it did unfortunately happen, but Natsu felt remorseful and Lucy was understanding. That displays their love and trust and whatnot! Regardless I still enjoy the story! I just thot it was one small thing ya know?

OWIE a dislocated hip and broken arm and ribs? Birch go to the damn hospital!

WOOOOHOOOO glad Levy and Gajeel worked that out. Still worried about Lucy lmao

Uhhh ooohhh

Oh if that was claiming then why the heck was everyone so worried! That seems fun and fine

I’m getting equally as anxious with all the situations Natsu and Lucy are in, and how they could all easily escalate and he could claim her too soon! And that’s good writing right there

See Gajeel needs to just tell Levy all this too, so she won’t be hurt and she’ll get to learn new information! Like I get it, it’s like confessing that he likes her but C’MON MAN be a big boy!

i never understand people who think fucking or dating a friend will mean the relationship will “never be the same” like yeah it might not ever return to how it once was, but even if it ends poorly I think good friends can still talk and work things out ya know? I’d rather learn things about myself either physically or emotionally with someone I already trust, than someone I just met or barely know! But ah, they r just being a little dense and hopefully she will snap out of that mentality soon

OH! An Incident! How cute!

Oh? An incident?

Also! I think you’re a really great writer if I didn’t already say! And I love the idea of Happy purposefully trying to give Lucy and Natsu alone time. He’s such a cool little wing man. HA LITERALLY

Ahh! First chapter is already leaving a great impression. Can’t wait to finish this all haha

Okay, really enjoying this fic, but the whole "barrier" thing in this chapter was super distracting. That's not a thing. Most everything people think they know about the hymen is a myth. There's no barrier, and if it's done correctly, it shouldn't hurt, even on the first time.