I love this fanifc so much please please update soon I really want to see what happens :)

Update? Soon. Please!

Fiiiiiiiinally got back to this. It's one of my favorite fanfics - so intensely beautiful and heart-stomping all at the same time. Just crazy good.
Thank you!

Okay, Wow! That took me just over an hour to read! Don't worry though, It was worth it! Amazing JB!

I really loved this chapter! (That was centered around Daryl) I love at the beginning, his nightmare when he was at his "home" which probably holds no good memories for him and then he "finds" Carol and she's "drowning" and he can't save her! That would be an awful dream to have but makes great for reading! I love Michonne and Daryl in this chapter a lot! She really is trying her best to help him even though he refuses! (At first) And you taught me the word "akimbo" tonight! Haha... And I loved the part where Daryl's so angry and full of rage that he just had to go down and kills some walkers I think him not having "his Carol" there it's like he feels he has nowhere to go to vent! I also loved when Rick tried to talk with Daryl, I hope Rick is truly remorseful cause in a ZA you can't really hold things like that against people for too long! I loved how you wrote "All this time I had with her, and I...I let her slip through my fingers" and also "You threw her out like yesterday's scraps and fed her to the wolves" you put "The Wolves" in there even if just by name and nothing else! I liked reading the council meeting too, Daryl zoning out cause he doesn't want to hear about how Carol is cause it'll bring unwanted memories! I think he'd be like that for real! I liked the flashback's you wrote! They were nice, sweet, light! I also liked how Daryl prayed for her, that he would try to pray and have hope or faith that maybe if he's patient enough she'll come back to him!

OKAY, So that was officially my last chapter! Now that its temporary over for me I'm a little bit sad I might just shed a tear... I'll try not to and be strong! So till next time! Bye! ;)

Ahhhh I loved it! You're really teaching me a lot of new words JB!

I liked where you wrote Daryl, Beth, Maggie and Hershel talking about what's best for Carol and the other members of the group that was a lighter moment, not so touchy-feely makes you sad kind of moment! And I'm even more eager now to see how Carol would react to the other members of the group! You made me get all touchy-feely during Carol's whole speech (don't no what else to call it) I kept thinking this isn't right!.. She's doubting herself as a mom, saying Daryl doesn't no her (Ha) and then she zoned out, I liked how you wrote Daryl's reaction to that by the way and then she became afraid of Daryl and poor Daryl's just hoping shell come back to him! And I love that he feels bad for not doing something sooner back when he thought he had the time and now its gonna be on her time!

Till next time, Bye!

This was such a heartbreaking chapter... Why you gotta make me sad, huh?! :'(

Just kidding, I loved it! I thought the way you portrayed Carol was amazing, I instantly thought of a scared little child and it was horrible to picture Carol like that but in real life if someone goes through something that awful I'm sure they'd be like that! So great job with that! I loved how sweet Daryl was being here too and I LOVE-LOVE-LOVED the Daryl flashbacks (as I call them) they were so sweet and made me feel even more upset that Carol doesn't remember anything/anyone right now! I'd like to see how she acts with the other members of the group now! And I really loved the at the end when you wrote: "Stay," she pleaded almost inaudibly. She was afraid to be alone. the single word was music to his ears. "You sure?" She nodded. He sat down on the floor of the cell with his back against the door. She didn't need to say another word. He wasn't going anywhere. There wasn't anywhere he would rather be. He would wait there as long as she needed him. It was his turn to be patent." I thought that hole part was brilliant!

So even though I got sad from reading this chapter, Totally still looking forward to the next! Be back tomorrow! ;)

I just recently discovered this and oh my god it's so perfect. Your writing is beautiful. My poor babies are suffering and I am not okay i just *sobs* they need some happiness... Hope you update soon. This is really good.

OHHHHHH O [me making shocked face] I Loved it and I once again must say how amazing you are at writing! Had to go to the online dictionary again as well! Hahaha

I'll start off with, How much I loved reading the beginning!... Inside Carol's head was very confusing (Like had to read it more then once confusing!) but I liked it I thought some of it was referencing to what these "men" did to her, how they hurt her and then Ed and Sophia and even Daryl with the line "All you had to do was keep an eye on her" showed up... And I felt so bad for Daryl here! I loved when you wrote "But her wild eyes haunted him as he closed his own" that was just... Wow! I don't have words to describe it! And the fact that Carol doesn't remember Sophia being dead and the possibility of not remembering her "family" has me on the edge of my seat just waiting for tomorrow so I can read the next chapter! (I want to take this story slow cause I don't wanna miss anything!) I also liked Daryl talking to Beth about standing up for herself and not taking any BS and thought Beth saying "Men are such A-holes" and Daryl saying "S'okay, I can be an A-hole" was a nice touch of humor!

Okay, Well that's it for now till tomorrow! This one has got to be the longest yet! ;)

I'm so glad you updated this story. Daryl finally breaking down was heart wrenching. How can Rick ever be forgiven? I won't ever. I love your writing style and I hope you continue with this story.

I'm so glad to have discovered this fic. It's really perfect. The right amount of angst, of damage and also of hope. And, in the right moment, I believe, the right amount of love. Amazing job, girl!

OK WOW, Another amazing chapter! Like seriously this is so well written that I actually had to go to .com cause some for the words were too big for me!... And I tired so hard to read this yesterday but I never got home till 10pm so I was way too tired to read! Haha :)

Now getting down to business, There was SO much about this I loved! I love the friendship between Michonne and Daryl here, How she helped him get out of his head, Telling him to eat etc. I loved Daryl and Rick's interaction with one another too, I thought it was spot on how Daryl would act! I also liked how you wrote Daryl not wanting to act like his father how he was Carol's man of honor, And I also liked how everyone reacted to seeing Carol since in my head I imagine its probably not a pretty sight to see! What happened to Carol is really awful here, and lastly the ending, Daryl staying there to watch over her! :)

Okay, Well that's all I can think of for this chapter! Sorry it's a bit long (again) But I just liked so much stuff! ;)

OH MY GOD! That Was Amazing! You are an amazing writer.. are you sure you don't do this for a living!? Anyway I'm totally hooked and if I didn't have to go to bed soon I'd probably read all 6 chapters!
I love how you described the beginning part when Daryl and Michonne find her.. that was a beautifully-broken scene! And love that their still at the prison! I can't wait to read more tomorrow I need to find out what's going to happen with Carol after what she's been through I doubt she'll just be fine! Oh and at the end when you wrote the "Please, just kill me" part I doubt Daryl will be taking that well either!
Okay well that's it for now sorry it's a bit long! :) ;) :)

great now I'm mad at Rick all over again and I love Rick LOL.
Michonne is right Daryl needs to take a short break and I'm glad he did. He can't lose her too and he wants her back. It will be a long road for her but with her family by her side she'll get there. thanks for the painful but excellent update.

Beautifully written, can't wait for more

I'm loving this story! Hope Carol gets her memories back soon