Wow! I think that was one of the best, if not the best action sections I’ve ever read! So perfectly written: gripping, really descriptive, flowed really well.
The plot is also an intriguing one. Something I don’t think I’ve seem on FF before which is very refreshing! I feel like Cap could be a little softer but I agree with your observation that, when needed, Captain America is all business and is the equivalent of a one man army!
Well done!

Such a wonderful telling of an awesome story, is it finished? Or is there more? I will shamelessly say that I am hoping for the latter! You are a delight to read.

I'm really liking this especially all the bromance. I hope to see Steve/Natasha coz I love this two together and it's always great to see coulson and his team. I'm looking forward to seeing Steve not be under the governments control and being a total badass and that Steve accepts he is an avenger and their leader. Can't wait for more

Oh wow. I love this story! The bit with the laser scope? Pure genius!

he's not alone

I like it.
Please continue :)

Hey. Great story so far. I like your characterizations, and the communication Bucky and Steve have built up. and now I'm curious about what Steve is up to. I look forward to reading what comes next.

Really good and interesting start to this story and I'm looking forward to more.

Just a heads up. Your post didn't come through right. I'm glad to see your working on chapter 2 though. Have a nice night.

Sounds like the start of a fun story. Glad to see you're writing again. I followed NANA when it came out so I'll keep an eye on this one too.

This is really good. I love Sam. Is there more? It's not marked completed. It works very well as a ones-shot, but also sounds like it could be the jumping off point to longer fic (which I would love.)

This was wonderful! Are you going to write more?

Excellent story, I was glad to see your take on Captain America/Steve's morality and what Sam sees as the next steps for Steve. This would be a great jumping off point and I hope you take it a step further as far as a full story, but either way, I was glad to read this.

Welcome back! I loved Captain America 2, so I'm thrilled you chose this fandom to write about. I can't wait for the next chapter!

My first thought when seeing your alert in my email was, "You still exist?!". So happy to see your stories again, your Harry potter FanFiction was the first I'd read and still in my top 10 that I've ever read. I loved seeing your take on the avengers universe, it's rare to see quality avenger fics on FF, I find most taking space on AO3. I think it's great that it was on falcons point of view, very refreshing. I would loves to see Stark, but Clint does "neutral spy" so well. The character study was spot on for Captain America, I love his character (although I'm most obsessed with Bruce/Hulk). Great writing, hopefully I see more! :)