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MyThoughtsAreScreaming chapter 5 . 6/21/2019 OMG I can't describe how amazing it is to find a decent Traught fic again! Please tell me you're planning on continuing this? |
TimeturnerJasmy chapter 5 . 4/22/2019 Missed opportunity, Robin. ;D With the Zeta Beams at your disposal, you could've just taken her out for Italian and gelato in Italy. That would have been a bit more romantic too, I'd say. But good on him for finally confessing! Glad that Artemis is taking it well. |
Rocketeer101 chapter 5 . 4/21/2019 I’m loving this story! Can’t wait for the next update! |
Clockworkgreen chapter 4 . 2/7/2019 I am absolutely loving this story. Especially the characterization of Dick and Artemis, it is spot on. Their relationship is super underrated and underutilized but you do it justice. I adore how you make them seem casual and conversation but theres still layers of personality and international thought going on underneath. The mindset of both is fascinating and contains a beautiful dichotomy of skill and circumstance. The story itself has been pretty damn good so far, with some really fun ideas and enjoyable character moments; the interplay of their abilities is cool as hell. If I could make a suggestion, for the future, maybe allow one of the two leads to drop their gaurd in a way that’s a bit surprising to the other, in a way that lets them connect on a more personal level in their civilian forms. Just a thought which you can totally ignore since you’re already doing a great job and I’m sure I’ll enjoy whatever comes next. |
TigerArrowgirl chapter 4 . 12/28/2018 Can't wait for season 3 either. And I love this. I like the fact it's a artemis and Robin story even thought I love Spitfire. Can't wait for what happens next. |
TimeturnerJasmy chapter 4 . 12/27/2018 Welcome back! Gotta admit, I wasn't expecting an update. I reread the whole story just to get back into it, and I still love it a lot. The new chapter was great, and! We finally got Barbara! x3 I always adore her dynamic with Dick, be it shippy or platonic; you seem to be going for future Traught though, which is all kinds of awesome, so Dick and Barb having a brother-sister-relationship (with maybe some harmless teasing flirting thrown into the mix because those two dorks just can't help themselves) is perfect. Speaking of Barbara, I'm guessing she's already Batgirl at this point? I doubt that she'd make that dismissive "It's not like I care about crime fighting or anything, b-baka"-comment if she didn't have an identity to hide. xD Which means we might get to see the Team (or at least Artemis) react to Batfamily-style team work. I can't wait! Glad to see you back in the game I'm looking forward to your next update! |
someonethe3rd chapter 4 . 1/7/2017 this is so good! I was so excited to see what happened next I think i read faster than I ever have before! it's was like rapid fire chapter changing! I love this so much and the whole trust theme you have going is really interesting. especially when Robin does somethign crazy and people react. it's really unique to see how you've accomplished that scene while keeping the characters personality traits intact. thank you for posting this amazing story and I'm super excited to read more! |
Freefan1412 chapter 2 . 9/4/2016 Loved this chapter, just for the smalltalk between Robin and the Riddler. Honestly, that is a part that often comes too short or is overdone when one of the Team Members is confronted with one of his/her villains. You hit just the right amount of familiarity, gloating, hostility and prying. Well done. :) |
Freefan1412 chapter 1 . 9/4/2016 Nice, very nice. By telling to from Artemis' point of view and not some weird hybrid this story gains a frame and makes it more real. Artemis and her thoughts and only what she knows. Her descriptions, her perceptions. Even if you change pov, so long as you keep it in the character's head, its all nice. The plot is good going too. Alien invasion going on somewhere else, leaving like the rest of the world and all Super Hero Cities in the hands of the junior team, meaning that it isn't out of character for the entire team to be here. Young Justice had a very fast response time, but that is the only thing I noticed in regards to critique. I also support the idea of having the Riddler around and about instead of the Joker, cause, really, there is a lot where the Joker has his screen time - Riddler is less known in this fandom, leaving his actions more of a mystery. Great job on this first chapter. :) |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/28/2016 Wow. More please? |
abandoned jendallrush chapter 4 . 1/13/2016 Oh my god you really need to update otherwise I'll explode. Hah. Jk. This is so good though! Keep up the great work! |
AthenaMonaLisa chapter 4 . 10/1/2015 Okay, I loved the chapter but I just wanted to point this out. First you said (wrote?) that Aqualad didn't spend much time in the sky, then he's flying a plane like he's been doing it his whole life. You may what to fix/explain that. Great job! Keep it up. |
Raquel chapter 4 . 9/29/2015 The ultimate startreck frase. It's a trap! Update soon! This story is adorkable |
Windninja1000 chapter 4 . 9/28/2015 Great chapter! Can't wait till the next chapter! :D |
randommonkeyz998 chapter 4 . 9/27/2015 I still love it! And I forgot to say, I really liked how you did robins POV last chapter, maybe you'll do some more? (Slips you a bar of chocolate) ;) |