Reviews for Lucius Malfoy's Revenge
Guest chapter 5 . 3/20/2018
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GuenevereNimueh chapter 13 . 11/22/2014
Well that was an abrupt ending. It was no bother at all, liked it quite a lot. This was a good story. Will be waiting for the sequel!
GuenevereNimueh chapter 11 . 11/22/2014
Really Headmaster? How about the fact that come winter or summer break and Pansy didnt come home? Sure even if Pansy's a bi*** that's too gruesome and dehumanised way to dispose of her body. You should be setting an example!

Anyway, to the next chapter...
GuenevereNimueh chapter 9 . 11/22/2014
Draco just told Hermione that he will use AK should Pansy tell a soul about the Sectumsempra and all she could say was 'oh okay'? Where had the goody two shoes Hermione gone? Also wasn't the fact that Pansy being obliviated meant she wont remember a thing about it? She would be curious on how she got marks if any but unless there's a way around it I guess it would be forgotten. (No pun intended)
GuenevereNimueh chapter 7 . 11/22/2014
So much for keeping their relationship in secret.
He will knock four times chapter 8 . 11/2/2014
Totally broke the 4th wall
SalthazarPhoenix chapter 8 . 6/4/2014
"And they say I have a bad temper," Harry mumbled and pulled him away, "You're going to get in so much trouble! Do you how much trouble I got into using it on you when J.K Rowling wrote the story?"

"Merlin's beard! She wrote that? I mean, she's brilliant, but, you used that spell on me? How did you find that out?"

"I found a copy of the book in the muggle world."

"Yes, I saw that too," Draco said, "But I only read up until we were on the train and I broke your nose, what rubbish."

"But that did happen!"

"Oh, yeah, I forgot."

Comedy Gold xD I scared my bunnies and had mountain dew spew out my nose xD You deserve a Grammy.
3terna1Y0ut4 chapter 12 . 5/15/2014
Yes! this right here is a good story. It had the built romance, crazy dad out to kill someone, and the ex-girlfriend that everyone wants to kill finally gets killed. This is a teenage drama! *cough* Sorry I shall control my fangirl but I like to give compliments where deserved.
dolhpin33 chapter 13 . 5/15/2014
Can't wait to read the sequel. Please post it soon.
I agree with you that homosexuality isn't a bad thing.
DarkFireofAngelsSouls chapter 13 . 5/14/2014
Sweet story I can't wait for the sqeul and dursely's reaction to Draco. Lol keep it up
sterekdrarry chapter 12 . 5/13/2014
Not a bad story. It was good, just, everything happened a little too fast.
sterekdrarry chapter 8 . 5/13/2014
Yes, because any parent would threaten a child like that. I think disowning Draco would be more possible than threatening death on him. But whatever.
sterekdrarry chapter 6 . 5/12/2014
Harry should at least be able to stand up to his friends, they aren't his parents, he doesn't have to tell them jack. Great story by the way. Just everyone is too ooc.
sterekdrarry chapter 3 . 5/12/2014
Hermione would never encourage Ron to do something as stupid as to fight, even if it's Malfoy only because he called her a name. But this story's alright. There are a few spelling mistakes, but I can get around them.