nah man, its good!

I am a simple man and this fluff pleases me.

One CLIFFY is CRUEL… but two is SAVAGE!

Wraaaaah!

And this was last updated on 'November 11, TWENTY-FOURTEEN!'

Yep… no hope for me(us)….. :'((

~LastOrder

Please continue, this ia an awesome story.

really good, lots of suspense, cant wait to read the next chapter .

I know you haven't uploaded a chapter in a while but I was wondering if you could start putting them out again. Advent is where I got my start on fanfiction because I got sucked in from this story. Could you please bring back this story, it's got so much potential and it's super good. ;) Please!

I really hope this information was worth it Ruby, I really do. The amount of stress you're putting on Weiss is not nice. I found it rather cute that Weiss would latch onto Blake in the meantime though. Hehe. And the image of Yang as a cat, nice! XD

Blah! I'll start with what I don't like, damn cliffhangers! Ton of drama, whatever it is that Yang yelled to Blake about in the kitchen, then what does Qrow know...urgh. I suppose I will wait like a calm individual, although DA:I releasing next week may make me disappear from the fandom for a bit XD And this isn't necessarily a dislike, but Yang is taking Ruby's absence remarkably well. Given her reaction to Blake's injury, I thought we would see something similar. Or perhaps this is due to her temper being restrained by Blake? I always pictured the Yang-Ruby sisterly relationship as the most protective and emotional one within the entire series, so one abandoning the other cannot sit well at all.

Ruby is still acting out of sorts, but I suppose that can be attributed to her obsessive and protective nature. Although it should make for an interesting return to the team RWBY household. Eager to see the scolding she will endure from, well, everyone haha. I liked the reaction from Weiss as well, as I imagine that to be the precise way she would react if her partner of four years just up and disappeared. Obviously the presence of a romantic connection simply makes the response that much more intense.

As for Qrow, given what happened within Volume two and the introduction of a certain someone at the end (won't say who since I have been accosted by individuals for putting spoilers in reviews already), I am intrigued by his identity and persona. He is typically portrayed as a straight up powerful individual, at least within the fandom, and it seems you are following that trend as well. I like it a lot. Will you be introducing Tai by chance? Or the mystery person? You probably already thought the plot through, but I am simply curious if we will see an appearance by them. Obviously combat prowess of that caliber would greatly assist against the Omega threat. But if there are no plans, oh well, wishful thinking from a fan.

Apparently I flipped on the analysis switch at some point today, sorry. Great chapter as always, even though you are endlessly teasing us. Looking forward to what is to come.

- Moongarm

Weiss curled up on a couch snuggling a pillow. Fuck. I can't.

Fuck you. That is all I have to say about the end of this chapter. Seriously, NOTHING substantial happened this chapter, only crying and small talk.

I've been reading through this whole story now, and I need to say, now that I reached the end (for now atleast, I hope : ) it was really touching and your writing style was really well, atleast for my desire. It was easy to read along and sometimes I was so delved into the story I could not stop.

Really well written and thanks for this.

Aside from your habits of using sentence fragments and extremely excessive hyphens, this story is well-written and enjoyable. I'm definitely looking forward to more.

Poor Weiss nooo TT You're too good at this.

Blah, plot intensifying and whatnot... What is Ruby doing? Nice touch that you have her running off by her lonesome just as she did in Volume 2, intentional or not nice coincidence. I'm very eager to see more about the Omegas, especially since it has been revealed that there is MUCH more to the Grimm than previously shown.

Yang will probably blow a gasket when she finds out Ruby is gone. Plus the whole trying to protect the team thing just seems strange. I understand that she tries to shoulder most of the responsibility, but given her insistence to not undertake any jobs until both her and Blake are healed, it is very strange that she is just running off. Perhaps did this for plot purposes? I have faith in the direction of the story, I'm just eagerly awaiting an explanation or reveal for her sudden abandonment of RWBY. Granted she did say that she could make it back so...I suppose abandonment isn't the right word, but yeah. STOP BEING IMPULSIVE RUBY!

Nice chapter, need more XD

- Moongarm

Ruby, that's mean. Making your girlfriend freak out for what will be like 12 hours. You better make it up to her when you get back missy! XD That said, I found it adorable at the beginning when Blake awoke before her alarm. Rather than just turn it off before the beeping started, she resorted to waiting and then turned it off after the beeping. I found that really hilarious. :P