I really dont know why everyon who reviews says that the chapters are great cut there arnt any?! When I look at the reviews I see that there has not been a Review for an year, from that I conclude that there has not been an chapter for an year and that I find sad.
From the summary I can say that this could be an fun and interesting story. Your writing style is not bad and I like it easy to read and not those enormous senteces.
I can understand that if there are major problems that you want a rewrite and thats ok.
Writersblock or just not having the right mood are an good cause, but it is really tiring for me to see an update to an hopefully soon good stpry just to see its an AN: oF course I accept your apology. Please keep writing.

I have to say, I haven't read anything, but your writing is hilarious. It just happen to be the humour I favore. I don't think it sucks at all.
David looks more like a cyborg than a normal human, but maybe it's a good idea to get the others involved in the story. Oh, one last thing. You don't make an idiot of Ichika. I can't help, but like that.
Saluut.

YOU ARE FUCKEN HILARIOUS !

um sorry bout that awesome story cant wait till the next chapter. if you need any help or anyone that is reading this feel free to ask :) im here to help

LOL awesome hilarious story so far. I look forward to the coming chaos now next chapter with a shit load of interest plus 50% more interest

So what will laura be doing there, is she there because of the miletary. Also you look like you are loseing interest in the story, are you sure you will continue this

... He is one completely crazy son of a bitch

not to be mean but I gotta agree with Tomy on this.

You make it like ichika and the others cant do shit, only david does the action and it is allways something dengerous. So make the girls and ichika do something, not make david the centre of everything

shouldn't Swan be in more trouble for what he did? I mean he KILLED 5 people (Even so I think that's to far.) and the scene at the mall. At this point running laps Around the field does't seem like a punishment.

Nice chapter, will ichika ever have too use the gun he just got like defanding himself from a lock breaking laura or a divine punishing houki

Very good chapter with Swan being crazy for tranquilizing Ms. Orimura and for the very nice detailed description of the bank and the Sig 224.

Keep it up

Well, that was funny. Also, I want to see Chifuyu sees David's handiwork shortly after he finished cooking the platypus.

When Chifuyu comes home, she noticed that no one was in the house until she checks outside. When she finds everyone, she notice a pool of molten metal on the backyard. She quickly recognize that this was one of David's handiwork, and now an extremely pissed-off Chifuyu prepares to give David a severe punishment, and maybe severely beating him up while she's at it.

If only David was real then the world would have fun with him

poor platypus deat by thermite, thats a first for sure. Any way stop here why not make chifuyu get home and see the melted washing machine in her back yard, if she can recognize it. also why platypus why not a mole or crocodile or ant eater

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Poor Platypus.
Also, HOW THE FLAMING HELL DID HE DO THAT?