aww this was a cool story, kinda sad to see that it stopped getting updates :(

please continue this amazing story I really want to read more of it and see how the plot thickens when Ash goes to the other regions!

Please bring this fic back I love the premise and execution

This story is amazing, and really well written

I love your story. Hope you get over your writer's block soon. This my favorite story of all time. But I know writing isn't easy.

I can't wait to see the new chapter. you are a really good author. keep up the great work. update soon please and thank you

do you ever plan to involve mewtwo and his clones in the story, cause if you do can you make some of the clone pokemon that he creates be clones of ash's deceased kin. Maybe make the clone charizard be the clone of the one that raised ash when he was young. It would be interesting to see what mew two would do with that type of information when he learns of a human raised by pokemon.

Please update!

I need more of the story please come

God I need more of this story I know you've disappeared but please please come back man I would pay money to see more of this I liked it so much

please update

Is there anymore or is this it really good wanted to see the rest

Ash the hatchling ;) So cute!
I really like your story so far!

You could have gotten pikachu to zap so Brock shuts up and listens to ash

when can we expect the next update