Finish this story. Please? Dude, I have been waiting for a great Sinoto fanfiction like this.

...fuck, that was really dark. But man, this is such an interesting story. It's unfortunate to see something of this level already dead. Plus, it's got my favorite pairing! What's not to like?

I really hope you come back to it someday, especially since this year and the next are all about Alicization.

I always thought Kazuto and Asian don't fit, but Sinon? Sinon and Kazuto is the perfect pair.

That ending makes me sad... Overall, what you've written so far is quite good, well, from my level of expectations. Anyway, the story is quite enjoyable, you haven't over described anything and it's just really fun to read! I doubt that you'll continue this, especially after two years, but hey, I can have hope that a new chapter will eventually come out.
-Striderm8

Man, it sucks that he gave up on this one

This year's at my heartstrings so much. I can only imagine how Sinon is going to feel about what she did... This is heavy, and I love it! Not many stories get me to feel like this. I can't wait for the next chapter!

great story has me really interested also i like the writing style in this one

Please continue been waiting to see what's next for so long. It's really good and I want you to see it to the end!

Please continue this story is awesome

Please don't tell me this is dead?

Holy shit that was brutal pardon my language, but just wow. I've read atleast about 200 fanfictions and none of them had child deaths in them. Not that it's bad, well it's bad but this fanfiction is really realistic and that there is never a happy ending for no one... Ugh i sound like a douche... Anyways keep up with the good work! Can't wait to see more gritty gore that your depraved mind can concocted (friendly jab). Anyways I liked and favorited this and I'd like to see more of the struggles with Sinon and Kirito

OMG! Kirito fall for Sinon! keep loving her!

NO FUCKING NO, NO KIRITO AND ANYONE ELSE, ONLY ASUNA AND KIRITO YOU FUCKING BASTARDIC MOTHERFUCKING BITCH

Holy shit. That kid got fucking wrecked. For a instance I thought they were actually going to wait at least a moment before blasting the poor fucker.

Anyways update soon and keep up the good work.

Yeah... that last scene was brutal... I feel so bad for the poor kid.

Not sure how you're gonna continue the scene though, there are so many possibilities.

Just wondering what the kids were doing wandering around that place so late at night... is it normally safe for them to be doing so? Do the orc/ogre/goblin raid parties just ignore them because they're the same race or something? I mean, even human raid parties wouldn't be that friendly to human kids...

Looking forward to the next chapter!