I just love this story I don't want to wait YOU are the BEST person that has ever made a jelsa. I don't know what's going to happen next. So exited!

I really liked Kristoff's POV I felt it was really accurate too. Amazing chapter, I'm super excited for the next one. :)

Listen to me very, very closely. You are not a bad person, and you never could be. I love your stories and I keep coming back because of this. Also, I love being able to give people feedback about their writing, and I will continue to review this story until you end it. Just remember, there will always be at least one person who will read your stories, even if everyone else has given up hope. The world is nothing without stories, and therefore, there is nothing more important than authors and their patrons.
Okay, now that I am done trying to build back up your confidence, let's get down to business. This chapter was well worth the wait. I love the new plot line and characters you added. There is so much potential, and I know that you are going to great things with it. I also love your intro to the guardians, and that hole "we have always been with you" kind of thing, it really added to the story.
Okay, so I showed get ready for bed. School sucks, it drained and is still draining me during my break, so I guess that is all I have to say. Nothing, signing off.

Update soon! Plz plz plz plz plz! I wanna know what happens next! Plz!

It's cool, I'm a sucky updater too. So interesting chapter. :)

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UPDATE! Please

God! I just started this yesterday and finished in one day! This was soooooo cute then it became so heart wretching in a matter of chapters! Like my brother asked me if i was ok and everything cause i was crying. T_T Good story cant wait for the next chapter!

I definitely liked this one better than the last, it incorporated some amazing things and I am just so excited about the next chapter. I can not wait for Crystal to meet the guardians! Also, I love your other story Last Hope. However I have been so wired by school that I have not had time to review. In fact, I am getting ready to go review that one so keep hitting refresh. Also I have been there with that internet thing and I am finding a lot of people I know have had to face the same thing. Anyway, keep writing, you are awesome.

Well I might go read last hope. I've been considering it for a while, but I don't like to start reading to many unfinished fanfics because I have a bad memory and then end up forgetting what happened and what the whole thing was about, but I might just go read it. Well amazing chapter. That sucks about the Internet though. Well update soon please. :)

Awesome work I love it! And I hope North can help them!

Thanks. Why I read this story is because it one of my favorite and that you're a great writer. I swear this is amazing story. Plus, now we now get to to see the guardians. Good luck making your next chapter. Thanks you!

Please update soon. It's been over a month. :)

Maybe pitch is trying to say it how crystal is going to die if she doesn't join him

HOW COULD YOU SAY THAT ABOUT YOURSELF IN CHAPTER 15?! YOU ARE NOT AN AWFUL AUTHOR! You are an amazing person and writer AND YOU KNOW IT!
I'm sorry for yelling. I just hate it when people think other people hate them for something that wasn't their fault. You ARE an amazing writer. Please don't say you're an awful author again because I promise you you're not. Don't EVER let yourself or others convince you otherwise. :)