I'm slightly disappointed that there's no Ash-Greninja in this story

I really like the story and hope you update soon... but for all of your saying and implying that Ash has amazing strategy you seem to be forgetting that if someone was a good strategist they would always keep a trump card in case of a ‘do or die’ situation, I mean Ash has so many amazing legendary Pokémon yet he almost never even keeps one as his sixth just in case the other battler is stronger, I mean is he really that arrogant (or confident if you want to go that route) in his Pokémon and strategy that he thinks no one can give him an unexpected challenge? (Sorry had to get that out).
Also, don’t you think you made greninja a little too strong, I mean he’s good but beating to normal Pokémon and a mega-evolved Absol while only getting hit once? Isn’t that a little too OP even for one of Ash’s Pokémon.
Again love the fic, hope you update soon.

So in canon, Ash lost because he was just stupid? Also, I like the cliffhangers. They make me want to read more.

*reads the rant* I will hunt, find and utterly annihilate you for hating on NaruHina! Sure, you can scream about evidence as much as you want but it doesn't change how Hinata has been in love with Naruto longer than he's loved Sakura! THEY ARE A MATCH MADE IN HEAVEN AND YOU VAN'T DENY IT! Also, I really love this story. One of if not the greatest I've ever read.

Skipped the build up, skipped the enjoyment.

I enjoy the story a lot. Please keep updating

Looking forward to the next this story is awesome also is it possible for nessa to join ashs hearm to since she's never been paired with ash before and she be the first glair region native to join and will there be other characters from glair like Bea Gloria or Marnie appear in this story and hopefully sooner than later we see skyla and lyra reunite with ash again it's been a while since we last saw them and be great finally see those two especially Rosa finally join ashs hearm

ugh, early chapters are usually the worst, I know this but wowza. that was so cringy I thing my balls decided to undrop themselves. I'll read a few more chapters, reviews of later chapters look mostly positive and I always read at least 3 chapters as g general rule, but wow. one thing that was more annoying than cringy though was Cynthia's comment on hugging. Just cause you don't mind getting a hug from someone doesn't mean you have a crush on someone noone her age should be that innocent, bordering on childish.

I actually agree with you that dynamaxing is a complete joke. Mega Evolution and Z-moves were amazing (especially the Mew specific Genesis Supernova).

Instead of dark pulse ice beam combo rename it to dark beam

Really should come up with better combo names. Explaining a combo that has all the attack names in it then saying what each one does is a bit much

next is the battle with lance? then im guessing that after that is the johto arc with the final battle with Tobias and the finale i am absolutely thrilled for this story and for you, your really doing a great job.

very interesting chapter. I know it's going to be a while but I look forward to the next update.

oh man. bringing in the gorgeous Nessa and asking to be Ash's student. will whe be joining the growing harem?

the sentences are simple a mess, you combine both the dialogue and the battle scenes in a single paragraph