OMG SO AMAZING :D AND BTW I LOVE UR SENSE OF HUMOR :D

Hmm, I think this would be pretty good if it was a little more serious. Maybe with a little more convincing introduction and it being set in the Sound village instead of a made up one it would be pretty good. I think using an existing village rather than creating a whole new one would be better since it connects to the naruto-verse much better. Would probably be better as well since you get to meet existing characters in a way that's more believable. Also maybe instead of Humor/Friendship it should be Tragedy/Psychological, adding a bit of dark atmosphere around it, spcing it up. Just things that could make it overall more exciting to read, for me anyways. Well, I'm rambling, sorry! Going to read the rest now!