this is so sweet, I couldn’t stop smiling from start to finish. Sasuke was really smooth and cunning lol (in a good way) and the way you portray the developement of their relationship in such a short oneshot was magnificent. Thank you for writing and sharing!

That was so cute! Great job!

Oh my god! I need a sequel

Love it. Itching for a sequel.

Oh ho ho a little couch action huh!

Lol... I thought Hinata was implying a threesome... hahah

Wow this was super cute, I absolutely loved it!

You wrote so beautifully! Your SasuHina interactions are great and I love the premise!

I want to add this to my favorites, but it seems that I bought already did... *pats back* good job for thinking ahead koko

i dont understand sasuhina like in the anime sasuke never talks to hinata?

This one-shot is really sweet. I love it!

No words. So amazing. In love with these two together.

I usually don't read SasuHina's but I really enjoyed this one.

Although despite what the other reviewers may have said, I do have some issues with this story.

But first the pros: The relationship was realistically paced.
They got to discover things about each other as the relationship went on.
They healed each other.

But my issues were that from the moment Sasuke began to pursue Hinata till he finally got her. It kind of gave off the feeling that Sasuke really only wanted Hinata for her perfect curves and melons. Especially at the ending where he watches Hinata's movements.
And how Sasuke kind of forgets that Naruto is the one who brought him back from darkness, so, kind of a dick move.

But it is sweet he wants Hinata to come cook for him.

That's it really, that's my only issue, but you can see how it impacts the whole story.

But I liked it a lot, it was simply and sweet. Though kinda corny. Sasuke got her fair and square.

Though I'd love to see a spin off, where after the ending with Naruto, he grieves and sinks in sorrow and regret for not pursuing Hinata sooner. Spending more time training and visiting Jiraiya, saying things like "Is this how you felt when Granny loved Shizune-neechan's Uncle, Ero-senin?" Only to remember that Jiraiya may have not pursued her, but never stopped loving her. Naruto does the same until eventually Hinata sees Naruto and wonders what she was missing out on.

Naruto and her spend more time together again and she even makes lunch for him again. Then the time comes when Naruto comes clean about his feelings to Hinata, but isn't expecting anything back.

Ends either with Hinata admitting her feelings for Naruto had returned and became even stronger. Or she accepts them but still loves Sasuke, allowing Naruto to finally move on and become Hokage.

Yes, I'm a NaruHina shipper, plus a NaruSasu genderbend shipper.
But read it thoroughly and reviewed fairly not like some SasuHina's fans saying everything SasuHina is 'perfect'. As a NaruHina shipper, I can see when one is shit, like the ones where Naruto and Hinata run away to Uzushio and became Daimyo before the Chunin Exams.

But this is my favourite SasuHina so far, as it is well written and plotted.

Awwwwwso sweet

This had a really nice build up. I read to many sasuhina fics were Hinata gets over Naruto far to quickly for it to be realistic. But you did a good job.
Thumbs up.