Is Len gender-queer or something? That makes a lot of sense

Oh, right, haha, the "things Len does for Rin" and "one-of-a-kind siblings" reviews were from me. xP I dropped off those when I wasn't logged into FFnet - FFn has a much shorter remain-logged-in period than AO3 and I always forget my password because of the weird and unnecessary password regulations and so, yeah, sometimes I don't notice.

Congrats, 22 reviews! :D Perhaps it'll get to 99 someday. ;) (Ignore the rude reviewers. There's no point in reviewing if you don't at least offer concrit.)

I'm really curious about Len's internal drama and the bananas (I never thought I'd ever read you writing him refusing a banana). I like the way you've chosen to tell most of the story from Rin's POV - at least the stuff that's all directly-and-indirectly (does that make sense?) about Len. Put together with Rin's teenage angst, and how she and Len seem oddly close for siblings yet it's never acknowledged by Rin for how odd it is, it just adds to the slight suspense and your own style of telling the story. (:

Cute chapter

Haha. I'll just say that Len and Rin are a one-of-a-kind set of siblings and leave it at that. xD

I'm reallllllly confused.

She's 14 and in first grade. Why do they talk like that?

Yay an update! :3 'Not much of a talented writer' my right foot. I like reading your writings - it's plenty different from what I usually read and you can see the interesting flavours of subtlety and the mixed, vague Diana Wynnes Jone influence in yours. Rin does sound older than five, like she's maybe six or seven, but only because she thinks of Len as some "immature kid" all the time. [cap]

Poor Rin. xP Though I like that Len tries to distract her all the time by annoying her. I know you won't answer this bit but I'm very curious about where exactly you're going with the crush-on-Kaito storyline. It's a bit funny because you do sometimes-ship Len/Kaito.

Ahahaha xD The things Len does for Rin. xP

This story is great so far. Despite not much happening yet its already very intriguing and the relationship between the twins is very realistic. Cant wait to find out what happens next.

Use quotation marks whenever someone is talking, instead of apostrophes.

Cheese tart, hahahaha. (I've always thought the phrase "butterflies in your stomach" weird. It's more like multiple clones of Berenice trying to fly around your stomach. And failing.)

Meow, adorable chapter :D Though puzzling cliffhanger at the end of course. And, approximately 12 Cs, I counted. Who's the Blue Lady?

I completely forgot to say today, but I was laughing when I was this update last night - I was restless and couldn't sleep and I'm reading this clump of Snarry fics with a zillion delicious sequels, each like a novel with 40-50-60 chapters each (you can blame the fact I haven't finished my English hw on those! I finished the first one on Saturday and one and a half yesterday. They're so DAMNED addictive everything else's importance rather melodramatically pales in comparison. Urgh, how do you muster up the will to write? I have like a zillion delicious fics waiting to be read and there are a zillion more out there), and so I thought of getting another glimpse and I saw this. Sneeze.

And this chapter seriously had me in stitches. xD

Idk why this story isn't getting enough reviews and follows, I'd love to find a C/L fic that was this slow-paced and calm :$ Meow, great chapter. (:

Six hours is less than enough more like - "why not a and b" xP

Sneeeze 3 I love this chapter, it's my favourite so far. I dunno why though, there's just something about it, hmm. (And it's such a coincidence, I was just wondering about this fic and then your ff email alert came in like QUACK QUACK QUAACCK.)