I really love this story so far! One thing I noticed is there is a HUGE time inconsistency (I've been trying to pinpoint Light's age). In chapter 2 it says that the incident with the wolves happened 6 years ago, but in chapter 4 Light says he was only 4 when it happened. That would make him ten, but considering he can drive isn't very realistic. This may have been a small overlook or a mistake, or just two separate incidents(i doubt it). Just wanted to let you know. That's the biggest thing I noticed other than some small grammatical errors. Keep up the good work.

First off, sweet song at the start of the chapter ;D

Light and L's date was super cute owo Right up until Light fumbled with his heartfelt words about L not being a monster… Then the mangled corpse… *sigh* That's a pretty bad end to a first date. Beyond sure knows how to ruin life.
I wonder what Light's father is so grumpy at him about…?

What have you done. I cannot stop singing Hunger. Hehhehheh. Empire has to be my favourite from their new album.

Fantastic as always. L needs to get his eating habits together. Hehheh.

Omg, I got the reference! Ohohoho aren't you a clever one, the cherries were a good flirting method though! Ah, I love supernatural fics! Keep up the chapters, as many as you can anyway!

Getting awesome good can't wait for more

I feel like this chapter was written with a lot of poeticism. I liked it. Especially the part when Light and Lawliet snuggled and then made out xD No, but really, I loved the ending and I'm glad the boys finally confessed to the attraction we've all seen from the start.

Oh gosh, I loved the ending part! That was so cute! And it's great how much focus there is on L's fading humanity, that adds so much drama. Now that they're together, waiting for the next chapter is gonna be so much more difficult, though :D

Yay! They finally confessed each other's feelings, to one another :-) loving this story by the way, looking forward to the next update!

Oh my gosh I am in love with this chapter! The ending was so sweet, I really hope that L will be able to cling to his humanity! Please update soon -Mika-chan

Getting fantastic good can't wait for more

Hehe, I remember reading the books these are based on. I hope this is updated soon, it's nicely written.

Oh my gosh! This is so good! I rarely ever read werewolf stories, but this one rocks. Upd8 asap!

ah, I feel so bad for them u_u

Wow I remember reading this story last summer and I was so in love with it. I thought you would never update again, I'm so excited to see that you've continued it! This chapter was very good, and I apologize for this, but I really hate Beyond. He fills Ls head with disgusting lies...
I hope L and Light don't fight for too much longer! It makes me sad. Anywho, keep up the updates and the awesome writing! Can't wait for some LxLight action ;)
-Mika-chan

I most certainly enjoyed this! I'm glad you updated :D
Ahhh~~ Such tension between these boys. I feel like we're standing on the precipice of something big; Light and L must be careful. Once they step off, there's no climbing out. But! I'm really intrigued by Light's human tinged with werewolf self. Part of me was like, let Light be the Alpha xD But I don't he nor L would be happy with this, and also Light has not displayed the ability to change.