Please finish this it is really good

It's Ambrosius, not Ambrosia.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE your story! I read all of the chapters in just a few short hours. Can't wait until you update again! I just had a suggestion, a mere reccomendation. One of the lyrics in the song 'Within You' (which I'm sure you're familiar with since it is the title of your story lol.) is, "I move the stars for no one." When he says that, I interpret that he usually doesn't just take children away for anyone, and changes anyone's world for them like that. But in this story you have him take babies away as one of his duties as King. Now does that mean he did more for Sarah than he would for any other person who wished their baby brother or sister away? Because he liked her, well now loves her? I'm just curious. Other than that little question, I adore your story and hope to read more of it soon.
-JarethsGoblinQueen

Oh, I too like that things take their time, so to me it's fine that their relationship takes time deweloping in to it's beauty. I liked this episode. To me it was warm. :)

Hoggle is a dwarf.

Wait- are Geneva and Rupert friends? That could end badly... Maybe I'm reading too far into the characters or making stuff up... Cool about Sarah's wish! Glad she gets to be Fae/ have someone love her/ whatever her wish was... Can't wait to read it!

Fantastic! Update soon!

:) I sincerely like your story as it is.. I'm wondering if Jareth calls Ludo & co to visit Sarah.. hoping she would be happy seeing them.. I also hope Sarah would slip a question about the beautiful lady.. or that she would meet her and finding she and Jareth has nothing going bethween them. :) But then again.. I'll be perfectly happy about what you will write it to be. :)

Wow, I can't believe how fast you are with uploading new chapters! I love it so much, but also I love how everything is playing out with Jareth and Sarah. but I do hope they fall in love with each other real soon. the suspense always kills me. :D

To answer your question about Geneva and Jareth. I hope nothing hahaha I would love to see maybe some Drama unfold between the two woman, but Jareth loves Sarah and no other woman can compete with that!

Keep her guessing, and a little competition, if only imagined, is still good for a nice little shake up and wake up call.

Very good chapter. Enjoyed it.

Jareth and Geneva are just friends. With the way he feels about Sarah, he can't feel any other way about anyone else. And I dunno... More Fae? Update soon! :)

Oh! The plot thickens! How interesting! :)

Another good chapter;well written, also.

Children are drawn to that song like magic. Bowie is brilliant. My little grand daughter was two when she first started watching it; at five still loves it. We have seen it a hundred times as she fixated on the movie. That is what got me to reading on this web site wondering what might have happened after Sarah went home.

Lylabeth1 at the end of my last chapter I gave a small reassuring hint that we haven't seen the last of her family. Lol I wrote if there's a 'will there's a way'. Sarah's family won't appear for a few more chapters yet but when they do, there will be a huge impact. Sarah's still trying to find herself. I don't want to give too much away but I have lots planned. Xx K