Okay, how to express my reactions… Oh right - HYLOCH IS SUCH A CREEP! Sorry about that, had to get it out of my system. Well written, as always. I would say I hope you continue this, but I am more concerned with your other stories truth be told. However, I did enjoy that. Poor Antimony, I feel so sorry for her: she went to all that trouble to wake Hylia up and then she had to run away. I like the inclusion of the Loftwings, big eagle-type things have always impressed me. I shall now cease my babble, good day to you.

Huh. That was good!
Although I'm not the biggest fan of smut, especially in the early chapters, I think it was rather poetic and well done. I've always been curious to what others think of in terms of the gods of Hyrule, and this has interested me :) I hope you update!

Well written, and the "lemon", if you can even put it in the same category as my stuff, was beautiful (which I wouldn't imagine is easy to achieve). Your take on the lore is also interesting. I'll be following this!