This was a fantastic read well done

Aww. I really liked this story. Just remember, those that protest the most, are usually the ones that enjoyed it.

Can I say one thing. You do know that Latios is Latias's brother, right? You DO know that it count as incest, right? You damn siscon. I am a siscon police and I would have to arrest you for writing this chapter

Will you be continuing

Arceus has a mouth to kiss with?

This is a b-rated site full of fetish garbage, stop trying to make something philosophical out of it.

Make sure it actually makes sense if you rewrite it.

INCEST ALERT

Wow, you can't copyright on fan material, especially when operating on a fan website based entirely on another owners material, plot, and characters, I would love to see you struck for copyright infringement.

I am severely disappointed in you that you give up writing this story. However, I am kinda relieved that your planning to rewrite this story. I want to see what will happen between Ash and Arceus. I do not know who's following Ash and his friends. I gotta feeling it might be Arceus. I hope that Ash better not harm Arceus. Again, please rewrite this story! I really want to know, so bad!

i love Aurumshipping

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HURRY THE HELL UP ALSO WHERE THE HELL DOES ASH GET HIS REVENGE!?

Let me know when the rewrite goes up

You know you can still write the story in your phone. I use Google Docs to write out chapters and then using the sites Desktop mode transfer it into a file and post it there. Practically all my stories right now we're done by doing this.