Love this amazing story

Kicking myself for not finding this story first. I began your second one... What's it called... "The definition of love?" only to get about halfway through and realise you'd written one before which would help clear up all my confused questions about there pasts that was referred to. I was so happy to find this and it's so good i just wish i had found this first... The mystery of edward not actually being homeless would of been fun unravelling. Despite that this is still amazing. I love it and bella and edward are brilliant together. There relationship fascinates me, it's all spark and fire, tenderness and teasing. Love them

I know you wrote this a long time ago so i question if you'll ever read this but I'm on chapter 5 and i just have to say that this story is BRILLIANT!

Great story! Really enjoyed it. I would read more of these two if you ever write more. Thanks!
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Great story! Really enjoyed it. I would read more of these two if you ever write more. Thanks!
:)

Gran fic
Grandes temas
Grandes personajes
Para reir y llorar
Muchas gracias por compartir
Saludos.

If he were a real journalist and this were a real newspaper (not a rag) he as well as the paper would have several major lawsuits on there hands for mentioning the names of these people in his story. He would also lose his job and his reputation as a reputable journalist and probably never work in the industry again. This would NEVER happen in reality. You do realize that don't you? He may write the story up, but he would NEVER mention the names of the people who were private citizens. Jacobs name sure, but Bella, her father, Lauren and her father's and his company would never be mentioned by name as all of them could and would send law suits to all of them, that includes the Companies and they would have the biggest suits of all. They would all most likely win bankrupting the paper.

Bravo. Great story

I love how Michael really showed up for Bella. Read between the lines.
She slapped Alice. Rosalie felt sorry for her.

Unexpected & brilliant

Wow... what a hurtful thing for Edward to do! And to name names. Omg

Love the Game of Life metaphor

I’m glad that you highlighted that everyday people become homeless. It happens just as you wrote.

I’m really enjoying this story. Thank you

You’ve set the stage for some real drama. I’m guessing Edward is an actor studying for a role, or a writer... either way... he’s going to be exposed and then our Bella will have some even greater soul searching to do. Great story

Love how you are taking your time and developing this story and your characters.