This is excellent, I’m glad to see this kind of stuff is still coming out :)

This is a very intriguing story! I’m quite interested in where it will go :)

Usually when I decide to browse through my favorites list and reread my top 15 favorite stories, this is among that list.

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*Waves*
Happy birthday.

O hello there new chapter~

wOO
HOW DO I EVEN START WITH THIS
how does one start a review for an amazing story-
aNYWAY
this chapter was AMAZING!
I LOVED the detail you put into this, including how you made Mary like drawing an art, since she's a painting and all- and as a person who loves drawing myself, I can relate to that little girl sitting at her table and just drawing to her hearts' content-

That little scene at the end with Ib being a loving sister caught me off guard and got me saying "awwwe" out loud by how adorable it was!
I'm honestly SO excited for new chapters 33

Also, happy birthday! I hope you have a great birthday!
See you next time!

oOOH a new chapter!
Dear cod I loved this so much!
mother of crab, this was so sad yet adorable to read ;o;

This story brings me so much happiness, even now when I'm in the middle of a family crossfire, thank you SO much for this chapter, it was absolutely perfect!
I wonder if we're ever going to see Garry in this, it would be pretty interesting XD

I love your writing style so much-
Keep up the amazing work, thanks again and take your time with the next update!

*inhale*

I loved this SO much-
once again, waking up without really looking forward to just being bored and alone all day, check notifications, then BAM slap on the face "hello new chapter here enjoy bye!" and it absolutely made my day~

This chapter was even more detailed and fun to read, and I love how the father was just so encouraging, and you kept the "She's not nice when she's mad" fact from the game about the mother!

I have a feeling that when doing the snowmans (snowmen?), Mary will make the mother, the father, Ib and Garry instead of herself- or just the parents and Ib since she's questioning her existance (relatable to be honest-)

Ooo Christmas is coming up! I can expect Ib to be very salty about this for some reason XD
About the AN-
I think you did extremelly well with this chapter!
(And I lowkey went back to chapter 1 just to read the new addition-)
About the AO3, aparently doesn't allow links to other sites, (which is pretty dumb) so there's nothing there- I think it would be best to leave your username there for people who want to go check it out and give you a follow!

Anyways, I've rambled about this fanfiction for way too long, just wanted to review and drop by that I absolutely love this, and it has to be my favorite Ib fanfiction on this site!
Thank you so much for writing this, and I hope you enjoy working on it as much as I enjoy reading it-
Love, Angel~

Okay okay oKAY
This morning when I woke up- dead tired and just ready to give up on life since I stayed up until 2 in the morning finishing commissions- And saw THIS in my inbox
I'm not going to lie- I squealed like a little school girl-

Honestly I wasn't expecting this to be updated so soon after 3 years the day after I found it!
And I'm SO, but SO happy- Seeing this author's note made my da and I can't express how absolutely happy I am right now since finding out this story is going to be continued-

Thank you SO much, Nyan! Even if you move it to AO3 I'll still follow it to the best of my abillities and If I'm able to get an account, even better! And if I can't, I'll review your story anyway if you allow annonymous reviewsw

Keep doing your best, love, Angel~

Oh my cod I absolutely love this!
This story is just so different from all the others, it's always the same thing when it comes to Ib related fanfiction- Ib x Garry, Mary feeling sorry for herself, Ib and Mary /Mary and Garry getting back on the real world but then coming back etc
So this was an absolute punch in the face!

I really like this, and I wished there was more because I finished reading this in less than an hour and it was such a good read. Your grammar and writing style are on point!
The chapters aren't very long, but they're VERY rich in content story wise and grammar, expressions and everything-

When reading I could feel the character's emotions- Mary's pain and regret, Ib's fear, resentment and sadness, the doctor's worry and the mother's anger when she scolded Mary!

I love this story a lot, and I REALLY hope this gets more chapters and love, it really deserves it.
So please, if you read this, please update if you have the time! Thank you so much for the amazing story, it was a lovely read )

Love, Angel~

Fun! I want more!

This fic is interesting, i'm hapy you write it ! Please continue, i want to know what's next so far ! I love how you write Ib and Mary, Ib especially in the first chapter. I'm almost crying when Ib think about Garry, and i was feeling so bad when Mary had her panick attack because of her guilt for Garry, and the visions. Good job !

Your welcome! - I don't have any ideas for you right now actually. Sorry. _ I hope something comes too you soon.

:3 I remembered this from sometime ago and decided to go back and find it. Now I find it and realize it hasn't been updated since September!
Please continue this and if you need some ideas, I have a magic idea-giving potion I would LOVE to lend to you.

ILUVIT! Um, heh, sorry bout that it's just that I love Ib and your story is actually reeeaaallly good, I love this story! As for fixing things, I believe you're doing better than the first chapter, grammar wise. Cause I remember some things messed up from a slip of hand and not rereading it to fix it, and stuff like that. But I love this story and hope you update a little more often (I WANT MORRE!) I can be a little greedy I guess. As for the story, an idea most likely a lot of us had in mind was, what if Ib decided to go back and try to retrieve Garry? I think a lot so if you do lack inspiration on this story come to me (and others), and if you want to hear some more bout the hole Garry thing I mentioned (Not sure is anyone else has so far, I haven't read the comments) I will gladly blab on about that to! So yeah! Wish you luck on continuing your life (and the story) and I really think the Gallery should be included in this. Like the Garry idea and yeah... BYEZ!