Reviews for Mendōkusei
Zawisza chapter 9 . 8/27
So glad to see this fic is not abandoned, thank you so much for updating! Kakashi being mad that a juicy piece of gossip escaped his notice made me chuckle. Poor Sasuke is going to leave the village brokenhearted, no? I worried that if Gaara gets a crush on Naruto too, it was going to get a bit much, but you seem to have skipped the fight altogether, so there were probably not too many differences when compared to the canon material. But Shino was definitely trolling Shikamaru :D that, or testing his reaction to fish for more intel... which can honestly be combined with being a troll xD
Wish you all the best in these particular times.
FyreDraagyn12 chapter 9 . 8/26
Oh dear. Sasuke honey, they’ve been married since you were ten, you’ve no chance at stealing a heart that’s already been given away XD
Lovely story, really enjoying it so far.
Looking forward to more, hope you’re doing well!
Guest chapter 9 . 8/25
Can you please upload?
Jin chapter 9 . 8/25
Damn, I had to read the story, but it’s even better than I remember it! I might sleep through my alarm in a couple hours and be late for work, but tbh it was worth it lol.
May you stay safe and your writing find you well!
HEART BEATZ 24'7 chapter 9 . 8/22
I'm excited! I love it! This is awesome!
Lyryenn chapter 9 . 8/22
WOW this fic is so good!
nagi92 chapter 9 . 8/19
Awesome story!
Clow Angel chapter 9 . 8/18
I get a lot of sadistic pleasure from Sasuke's jealousy. XD
Emna7887 chapter 9 . 8/17
please continue ... the story is super cool and cute, I want more..PLEASE
Ruleinz chapter 9 . 8/17
Yaaas update! Shika femNaru Goals
Shika is so cute! As always~~.Though I did NOT expect the last scene with Sasuke. He just now officially turned into a Love Rival lol
...wonder if he will be yandere( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)
forestreject chapter 9 . 8/15
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Road Camelott chapter 9 . 8/13
I don’t know how to feel about this jealous version of sasuke... I mean it really cute but at the same time I feel pity for himlives this chapter and can’t wait to see more! (Hope sasuke doesn’t turn into a jealous monster)
Zerimar chapter 9 . 8/12
Yay! I am so happy for this update, I love all the action and how the relationship between Naru and Shikamaru is progressing. Please don't make is wait too long for the next update!
munchin munchkin chapter 9 . 8/10
So much action!

I don't actually think Kakashi deserves an explanation for what is going on between Naruto and Shikamaru. He doesn't even know that she was almost taken by Danzo or that she was training with Jiraiya instead of Ebisu. That screams of negligence, especially since he saw firsthand that those two didn't get along.

I hope Shika acknowledges the ingenuity of Naruto's attack plans when fighting Neji because that tunneling punch was clever. Also hoping for some cute scenes of the two of them talking about what happened after they split up. Also also hoping that Jiraiya asks for both of them to go with him when they search for Tsunade, maybe to try and haze his godson-in-law or maybe to embarrass the two of them. Like, how cute would it be if they had a festival date without anyone else bothering them? Or have Shikamaru keeping Jiraiya in place to keep him from peeping since Naruto said she wanted to try the hot springs (since the village baths wouldn't let her in). Maybe some more training montages for the both of them where Naruto is trying to learn the Rasengan and Shikamaru is practicing the next level of his Shadow techniques.

Oh! I also REALLY want Shikamaru to advocate that Naruto should also be promoted to Chuunin since she was the one who stopped a rampaging Bijuu (something only Kages have done in the past), also the one who actually calmed Gaara down long enough for relations with Suna to smooth out, AND convinced Tsunade to take over as Hokage while mastering an A-rank jutsu, ensuring the strength of the Leaf. It'd also be interesting to see how a promotion will effect team dynamics since everyone else on Team 7 kind of always looked down on her no matter how many miracles she makes.

I have a lot of feelings about Naruto never being promoted when big things like this happen. Someone needs to acknowledge and reward this progress!
godess bubbles chapter 9 . 8/9
ahh jealous Sasuke makes a appearance!
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