| Reviews for Carnival Games |
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celiagod chapter 1 . 12/3/2019 I Love it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2018 Can I say I love haunted mansions! So hot! |
Sol Dixon chapter 1 . 2/14/2016 Hello. I am from Argentina, so thousand excuses for my disgusting Englishman helped by a translator, haha. I was charmed with it, was so warm and I adjoin at the same time. I liked that Daryl and Beth were more free and were enjoying one of other one. When it goes to a Mansion of the Terror I am going to think about your fic, hahaha. I loved it. |
lovely smile chapter 1 . 2/18/2015 OMG loved it! |
juicypapeaches chapter 1 . 1/8/2015 dam girl...very hot! |
FanOTheFang chapter 1 . 1/8/2015 Really enjoyed this! Thank you! |
Trixieviv chapter 1 . 1/3/2015 Very creative idea & written so very well. Loved the playfulness between Beth and Daryl. And your sex scene was done wonderfully and was oh so hot! Really enjoyed this! |
Ninazadzia chapter 1 . 12/1/2014 My love for this fic knows no bounds. Just... Ugh. BEAUTIFUL. |
Gerp chapter 1 . 11/27/2014 OMG... OMG... OMG... I think you broke me! |
Tiffasian chapter 1 . 8/4/2014 I love this story! The only grammatical error I saw was the occasional dangling modifier, but otherwise, it was very well-written. You did an awesome job portraying the dynamic between Daryl and Beth. That spark of chemistry in their chance encounter led to a sizzling smut scene that we can all enjoy. I really hope you do a follow-up of Daryl and Beth in the ferris wheel because I just love the scenario you've set up. But this fic is completely fine as a one-shot, so please don't feel pressured to churn out a sequel :) Keep up the great work, and I hope you write more Bethyl in the future! :D |
SeattleGirl359 chapter 1 . 6/13/2014 What an original idea! The story was so intriguing |
Verostar1221 chapter 1 . 5/18/2014 Whoa! *hand fanning* |
cemmia chapter 1 . 5/12/2014 Just loved it! |
Belladcmum chapter 1 . 5/10/2014 Oh my goodness! This was hot and awesome! |
gh0stbunni chapter 1 . 5/9/2014 I loved it! OuO ya shall be added tp my alert rawr! amazing work and ekkk Daryl i say Knight Daryl with a Commoner Beth but is secretly royalty? Idk im a derpy girl hahahah but i do love ta read thats for sure! ;) *tackles author in a hug* fab work ya wrote it well! Just amazing! Xoxo |