Reviews for Carnival Games
celiagod chapter 1 . 12/3/2019
I Love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2018
Can I say I love haunted mansions! So hot!
Sol Dixon chapter 1 . 2/14/2016
Hello. I am from Argentina, so thousand excuses for my disgusting Englishman helped by a translator, haha. I was charmed with it, was so warm and I adjoin at the same time. I liked that Daryl and Beth were more free and were enjoying one of other one. When it goes to a Mansion of the Terror I am going to think about your fic, hahaha. I loved it.
lovely smile chapter 1 . 2/18/2015
OMG loved it!
juicypapeaches chapter 1 . 1/8/2015
dam girl...very hot!
FanOTheFang chapter 1 . 1/8/2015
Really enjoyed this! Thank you!
Trixieviv chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
Very creative idea & written so very well. Loved the playfulness between Beth and Daryl. And your sex scene was done wonderfully and was oh so hot! Really enjoyed this!
Ninazadzia chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
My love for this fic knows no bounds. Just... Ugh. BEAUTIFUL.
Gerp chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
OMG...

OMG...

OMG...

I think you broke me!
Tiffasian chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
I love this story! The only grammatical error I saw was the occasional dangling modifier, but otherwise, it was very well-written. You did an awesome job portraying the dynamic between Daryl and Beth. That spark of chemistry in their chance encounter led to a sizzling smut scene that we can all enjoy.

I really hope you do a follow-up of Daryl and Beth in the ferris wheel because I just love the scenario you've set up. But this fic is completely fine as a one-shot, so please don't feel pressured to churn out a sequel :) Keep up the great work, and I hope you write more Bethyl in the future! :D
SeattleGirl359 chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
What an original idea! The story was so intriguing
Verostar1221 chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
Whoa! *hand fanning*
cemmia chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
Just loved it!
Belladcmum chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
Oh my goodness! This was hot and awesome!
gh0stbunni chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
I loved it! OuO ya shall be added tp my alert rawr! amazing work and ekkk Daryl i say Knight Daryl with a Commoner Beth but is secretly royalty? Idk im a derpy girl hahahah but i do love ta read thats for sure! ;) *tackles author in a hug* fab work ya wrote it well! Just amazing! Xoxo
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