Reviews for Summer Vacation
neeleyamanda chapter 3 . 8/17/2017
please update more
TVD28 chapter 3 . 3/5/2015
Please continue it! It is such a promising plot! I love where it is headed!
Serena chapter 3 . 8/24/2014
Wow that wasssss fantastic write another please
cee chapter 3 . 7/31/2014
please continue
jenny chapter 3 . 6/29/2014
Luv it plz update
nameless chapter 3 . 6/11/2014
Make
unknown chapter 3 . 5/21/2014
your story is great but i think you should of a least finish the whole chapter about how the vacation went and all i hope you finish the story of how the vacation went
Guest chapter 3 . 5/18/2014
That was soooo good update soon!(人)
Guest chapter 3 . 5/13/2014
Love your story please continue
Guest chapter 3 . 5/11/2014
I think it was awesome but try to put P.O.V's more often I mean I could tell who was talking but it would be a lot easier but other than that it was awesomer than awesome like extrordinary please continue writing
Mystery chapter 3 . 5/9/2014
Amazing Story! Continue!
Guest chapter 3 . 5/9/2014
I love your story and your description on how they feel even what they're wearing. You are a really talented writer please keep going with the story I come on this site and check everyday . I hope we will see ayano and kazuma together soon ?. Please update soon it's such a good story hope this isn't to pushy.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/9/2014
It's very nice
jenny chapter 2 . 5/9/2014
I love it please continue:-)
Guest chapter 2 . 5/8/2014
Omg I love your writing and everything it's to perfect please continue you are a amazing writer. I love the descriptions on what they wear and how they feel it makes it so much easier to imagine. Please continue your story and update soon hope it doesn't sound to pushy
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