what happened to the war betwwen amazons and the greeks and romans? I thought there would be new slaves from the amazon side and the queen would be percy's bitch. dissapointing ending

Can piper and annabeth get pregnant

just saying that the grammar and spelling and overall syntax issues make this painful to read.

Isn't that there's more chapters to come? When?

Hope you update soon

You need to fix your spelling, grammar, grammatical structure, sentence structure, and your phrasing.

major grammatical and spelling errors need to be fixed great plot

Why did you stop? It was wonderful, and more chapters would be much appreciated.

plz update! this is gr8...

ps. update! its mah b day!

Update please

hazel should be just as u got here . piper should be more sassy . and Annabeth is okay but be a little more stubborn

Hey this is a good story you should update

Nice

Dear Henrie:

You know, I've come to think that stories like this - you know, where the identities of well-known characters are transferred to completely different people, as though Percy were taking a role in a play or something - really should have a special site of their own in our little community here. After all, it is rather a distinct genre from fanfiction proper, with its own special appeal and its own special demands on the writer - and it would just be cool to have a green-bordered sister site emblazoned with the legend, "Fantomime: Imagine What Might Be." (I don't suppose you'd care to join the e-mail campaign to get such a site created?)

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

nice little cliffhanger you did there...D