Hey it's been 2 years where's chapter 27? I'm kidding but on a serious note I love this story. You have a great writing style and this plot is amazing! please come back!

I LOVE IT!

I was honestly beginning to think Loki with all the unbelievable creatures...giant poisonous frogs, huge radioactive spiders, godzilla...freakin' fire throwing unicorns...it HAD to be magic. Lol. I want to see Thor's confrontation with Jane. The b*tch just up & gave up on him, assuming he abandoned them. That's a horrible girlfriend right there.

I'd still be pissed...at BOTH of them. And you make Coulson out to be a LOT more robotic than he was in the movies & then the show. Or maybe you're going for how he was before he evolved into a more emotionally healthy character? Still...3 freakin' years? They could have told Clint that he was alive but not given details. Both Coulson & Nat would have been good at that. Their empty excuses are sh*t.

Yeah...I've hated how they've kept Coulson being alive a secret. And now he's most likely dead for real & the team never even knew. It pissed me off. On another note...Janet's really irritating me. Why is she acting like a 12 yr old vapid cheerleader? Janet was a LOT more mature than that. (

How did Peggy's phone get in Tony's bedroom?

Omg...this story is so beautiful chaotic in their interactions. Lol. You've gotten their comic book personalities down perfect. )

Someone needs to knock Tony out. Either physically or with drugs. He's VERY close to mental shutdown. At 7 days of no sleep, people start hallucinating. He should start blacking out soon. No amount of caffeine stops that.

I get that Steve's feeling self conscious. But he's being an ass. He needs to have some sense slapped into him. I nominate Nat or Peggy. I think it would be doubly satisfying if it were Peggy. Lol. I can't WAIT to see what Sam names his phone. What's Nat's Phone's name?

I absolutely LOVE the back & forth...the effortless way you have them all converse with each other in such a playful manner. I love that your Hawk is more like the comics (even though I love the movie one). I feel bad for Steve...all he went through to get to a point where his health & outer appearance matched his inner strength & will...just to have it taken away. I hope Tony can make him see that he's still Captain America even w/out the serum. And Tony's just adorable w/how he acted at STeve's bedside. Who wouldn't want someone like that at their side?

Well hell...that's one way to ruin a first date.

I love Peggy. Lol.

The visual in my head of Nat & Thor watching Project Runway is hilarious. Lol.

He tried...to teach the cat...to use a thumb print scanner...

Omg...lol.

The cell phone definitely needs a name. Lol.