Deym! Gray you badass

I think ui's friends kidnapped layla since she's an angel XD

Cute end :)
Poor Lucy );

no mistakes so far it was good to follow and i hope there will be another update soon

So short but so much happen how will Lucy act towards Gray now will she accepted him and end with a happy ending with a perfect couple with a beautiful daughter and maybe a bun in the oven. Most likely not though ;( maybe Layla will be kidnapped because she is now recognized as Gray's kid since Gray is rich ;( poor Layla I'd rather have Lucy be kidnapped but that's not much better... But the story is most likely to go in a completely different direction

Actually there's no wrong , did have? Actually its short :( could you make it longer?

~heart heart heart

Please update soon :)

GAHHHHHHHHH GRAY IS HERE

Dude this is sick, omg cant wait for the next chapter UWAAAAAAAA Damn my feelings

happy you updated keep it up :D

I wonder if it's sting or Gray that said the last line to help Lucy out maybe sting but probably was Gray

OMG THIS STORY JUST KILLS MY HEART HOLY. While reading I was listening to Hedley's Pocket of Dreams and everything clicked. The feels TT_TT

uwaaaaaah you finally update your story! i really excited :D please update more, i really like classic stories like this one hehe

I like your story, really .please update as soon as possible :)

Running away may not help but Lucy's past is so tragic I'm crying;_;