Reviews for The Long Night Continues |
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jimguy chapter 1 . 1/22/2017 you know like other arts you make. |
jimguy chapter 1 . 1/22/2017 can you make winx club arts on deviantart please |
jimguy chapter 1 . 1/22/2017 a infected similar like in in winx club stories |
jimguy chapter 1 . 1/22/2017 can you make winx club stories like infected and vampires things please |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2015 Nice. This isn't finished, right? |
Striderjay chapter 1 . 2/22/2015 Update please |
timothy.nguyen.73 chapter 1 . 12/15/2014 MORE! |
Gaiseric chapter 1 . 5/8/2014 Nice to see something like a continuation of this, though some of the aspects feel a little...too easy. I mean sending Tenten in alone feels like too blatant an attempt to spread the infection. I mean sending someone in like that with no backup structure...I think it lacks some of the thought of the earlier 'captures'. Sorry if that sounds harsh, it's just it feels like throwing wood on the fire for no real reason. I was sort of hoping for similar to what happened to Ibiki or Shikamaru along the lines of in-depth attempts at infection. I mean the Yaju aren't simplistic and unthinking monsters, so I just felt a bit...unsure at the two sides of things, with the almost careless way Tsunade sent in Tenten and the fact that she seemed careless in her infiltration and went by herself without questioning why she was sent alone. Just a few thoughts. Look forward to seeing how more pans out, even if I'm not necessarily a fan of NaruAnko stories if that's the direction this is heading. |
Kedo chapter 1 . 5/8/2014 Awesome that this one continues, really like it. Will be nice to see of Naruto is immune due to Uzumaki and Kyuubi healing powers or not. Maybe he even starts a counter infection, though not sure if humans powered by biju chakra would be better than what Anko did. |