Steve is still feeling guilty, isn't he?

Good story...seems to be good characterization...structurally need to watch verb tenses

Oh wow. This day turned bad really, really quick. Danny sure does have bad luck. No wonder he's always so paranoid. Very in-character for him to check on the little boy, try to get the gun from him and then to worry about the little boy through his whole ordeal.

Steve negotiating over driving Danny's car. Always the control freak. lol Seeing all those girls with nail polish and glitter at Steve's house would be a wonderful scene that I wish they had done in the show when Grace was younger. Having them out on the lanai might not be so bad.

Always enjoy the Danny whump. Our favorite patient.

Love your hurt Danny whump stories. They are the best.

Poor Danny of all the bad luck. Just when he was getting better and was able to drive his own car.

I just read the first story and this one. Both were great. Poor Danny he just can't catch a break can he. I did like how he got to drive his car though. I'm now going to read more of your stories.

This was a great sequel to Forgiveness. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, especially because I love Danny whump and Steve angst. Looking forward to future stories from you.

I'm relieved to see that Danny made it through the surgery. Thank goodness the bullet didn't hit the femoral artery, or he would've bled out before help could arrive. Again, he needs his ohana to help him through.

This was a great beginning chapter. Poor Danny, getting shot again so soon after the last time. This would make a great episode.

Nice, Poor Danny. He is always getting hurt. Good thing he has a family to back him up.

Lol Steve and his driving issues, I tell ya. Great story, loved it.

Nice ending! Thanks for this little sequel to Forgiveness. I enjoyed both stories. (You can pick whichever colored cattle prod you'd like!)

Great story.

Nice happy, light-hearted ending. Great job on this follow-up to Forgiveness :-)

Glad the surgery went well, although it sounds like Danny is not out of the woods yet. I feel bad for the young boy who thought he was helping his brother, though.

Don't know how I missed this story when it was first published! Love it - a really exciting start!

Great little story, poor Danny being shot twice in a row. Steves turn next I think.