Dude, you made naruto go through a suicidal phase, have someone snap him out of it, then make him go through another suicidal phase, have his mom snap him out of it, then fking made him do something sucidal again. Dude, STOP using to same old plot lines, its getting old, and it adds nothing to his character development, it just delays the fking story

Well this chapter is entirely pointless, its just a repeat of things that happened before, it adds nothing to the story or charactor. And we get it kurumi will stay with naruto till the end of time, no need to repeat it 20 times.

continualo seria genial ver mas capitulos

This is very good and I would love to see more updates done to this story.

what the fuck is with this p.o.v bullshit

Again just made Naruto stupid, there’s arrows and bandits everywhere and instead of bringing the kid back to the hiding spot he lets him walk alone in the middle of it all alone

How can Naruto be called smart, or strong when he’s stupid enough to announce his self to the people holding his family hostage. Guy can make a thousand clones but instead yells let them go by himself. Doesn’t sneak or anything, seems dumb

the first few chapters of his story make no sense, How the hokage does not know what's going on with Naruto, he literally has a fucking crystal ball

And how the kyuubi is afraid of a woman who can not even kill a 3-year-old

really excellent narration. Its as if i was reading a folktale. nice work!

I'm actually curious if Uchiha Massacre still happened. Because, if it did it would have large implications for how Sasuke acts in this story and how he will react when Naruto comes back. Also I'm curious to how the relationship between Naruto and Kurumi will work out as you have the pairing set as NaruHina.

Other than my curiosities this story is truly excellent and I can't wait to see more of it. The pacing and dialogue are very well done, and I can't wait to see how Naruto grows from his broken state.

Naruto being so rude to Kurumi is irrational. He doesn't know that she's the reason why hes hated, just that she knows why. He jumped to conclusions and conveniently forgot shes the reason for his survival.

The first 4 chapters are seriously fucked up. The Matron deserves to have needles shoved up underneath all her nails and then be set on fire from the needles.

This was very well done! I was honestly expecting Mei from the Mist Rebellion, but this just as good. Don't think it was ever stated, but I'm pretty sure a man was the new character. Whoever that is. You are very good at writing a captivating readers, and you even avoided the god-route. Somehow. Hopefully Naruto meets up with Konoha Nin at wave.

love your style ,plz update soon

kinda fell apart this chapter. as well as the 5 and 6. It really is a stretch to have a 2 yr old understand complicated shiz like that