Reviews for Ark of Time |
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gabelou1991 chapter 8 . 4/2/2018 Tu as dis que Gohan pouvait se transformer en ssj après Mystic . Dis moi oùà tu trouve ? |
victor0606 chapter 9 . 6/17/2017 Great fic :). |
The Errors Oh chapter 1 . 5/28/2017 So... so many... so many errors! My eyes! THEY BLEED! Joking aside, there are a massive ton of errors in this. Misspellings/typos, bad grammar, and so on. It makes it nearly impossible to take even REMOTELY seriously. I couldn't even finish reading it. I had to resort to skimming it to stop all the reflexive eyerolling and cringing. Seriously, you need a beta. Badly. Very, VERY badly. |
gabelou1991 chapter 9 . 3/20/2016 J'aime j'attend la suite avec impatience. |
pr0dz chapter 5 . 9/23/2015 Chi-Chi killed me XD dying hair? l00lz |
AJ chapter 9 . 8/3/2015 por favor actualiza pronto la historia, después de todo no me gustaría que una historia tan buena fuera olvidada sin un final apropiado |
keyshawn9811 chapter 9 . 7/26/2015 Hello my name is Darrius and I want you to please continue updating your story it's getting better and better now that I can't wait till you update your story but yeah Please continue to update your fanfiction it's getting better and better now so please continue to updating please and thank you. |
Dyton chapter 9 . 7/16/2015 I'm not going to lie, for a second I thought Frieza would still get his way, but I'm glad that Gohan was able to step in and finish the fight that Goku was so reluctant to complete. I really liked this chapter and I can't wait for the next part and more divergence. Keep it up. |
red chapter 9 . 7/13/2015 por favor actualiza el fic rápido que me gusta mucho |
tu puta madre chapter 1 . 7/2/2015 maldito actualiza ya el fic coño |
red chapter 2 . 7/2/2015 ¿cuando es el siguiente capitulo |
julio chapter 3 . 7/2/2015 por favor actualiza lo rápido el fic obvio |
gregorio chapter 4 . 7/2/2015 ¿cuando es el siguiente capitulo? |
darckangel chapter 4 . 7/2/2015 por favor actualiza pronto el fic |
pedro chapter 5 . 7/2/2015 espero que gohan consiga un harem con bulma en el por cierto ¿cuanto falta para la siguiente actualización? |